Another random thing

[Dumdumdidi]

took me 15 minutes. comment pls

[Liberated]

that looks really nice, but you could improve it still. Try playing around maybe with the colors a little, and the contrast.

[Soala]

It looks really nice to my eyes
Good job !

[Pelikano]

Originally Posted by Liberated

that looks really nice, but you could improve it still. Try playing around maybe with the colors a little, and the contrast.

Wtf dude?

Tell him WHAT you think needs to be changed. "play around with the colors" sucks.

[Liberated]

Originally Posted by Pelikano

Wtf dude?

Tell him WHAT you think needs to be changed. "play around with the colors" sucks.

Since im not expert enough to judge if other colors would really look better, and if they do what colors would look better, the best advice i can give is that he maybe should play around with the colors.

I can quite understand why you have that red fame cube below your avatar


And all you are doing in this thread is trying to(and failing miserably) bash my comments, so "WTF dude?" to yourself.

[Crono]

Looks nice and easy on the eyes.

Originally Posted by Pelikano

Wtf dude?

Tell him WHAT you think needs to be changed. "play around with the colors" sucks.

How about you post on topic instead?

[Pelikano]

Originally Posted by Liberated

Since im not expert enough to judge if other colors would really look better, and if they do what colors would look better, the best advice i can give is that he maybe should play around with the colors.

I can quite understand why you have that red fame cube below your avatar


And all you are doing in this thread is trying to(and failing miserably) bash my comments, so "WTF dude?" to yourself.

if you ain't expert enough don't post, confusing the "artist" of the image.

Crono that is topic.

[Crono]

Originally Posted by Pelikano

Crono that is topic.

Topic was made for people to comment on his work, not comment on eachother's posts which is hypocritically what I'm doing (then again I already posted about his work so whatever).

[Galdor]

Well if he made that image in 15 min thats VERY impressive if he just copied & pasted in stuff other people have done and changed the colors some thats almost impressive.. I guess, but it mostly depend on how the original image looked :P but anyways it looks nice :]

[FreakyDonkey]

Nice!

[Liberated]

Originally Posted by Pelikano

if you ain't expert enough don't post, confusing the "artist" of the image.

Crono that is topic.

you should learn to read. I am not expert enough to tell exactly what to improve, but i can give directions or hints on what could be improved, altho i can't exactly say how, which will also help the artist because if he learns himself what looks better he will always be able to apply it in his future art.

+the fact that your avatar is in jpeg proves that you hardly know anything about art and shouldn't be posting here.

[bahamutstevetff]

Originally Posted by Liberated

that looks really nice, but you could improve it still. Try playing around maybe with the colors a little, and the contrast.

theres nothing wrong with the colours, its awesome as it is.

[Rufus]

I like it, but you need some work on picking better fonts / manipulating fonts.

[Elk]

Originally Posted by Rufus

I like it, but you need some work on picking better fonts / manipulating fonts.

Agree

The classic constructed font you picked doesnt fit at all
a French Baroque Antiqua would fit better

[Dumdumdidi]

Originally Posted by Galdor

Well if he made that image in 15 min thats VERY impressive if he just copied & pasted in stuff other people have done and changed the colors some thats almost impressive.. I guess, but it mostly depend on how the original image looked :P but anyways it looks nice :]

well:

lemme change the font now (: