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[Genesis]

How long have you been making levels?

[JohnnyChimpo]

Scott, I apoligized for lashing out last night and i know what you thought of it id just like to see what other people think. Its not being childish im just trying to see what was wrong so that i can fix it next time. and i havent talked to you on AIM yet Shadowless but I was hoping you would get on so I could tell you the same thing. That I apoligize and this forum post isnt about what happened i just want to better myself.

[JohnnyChimpo]

Originally Posted by Genesis

How long have you been making levels?

A bit. Why?

[Genesis]

Originally Posted by JohnnyChimpo

A bit. Why?

Because if you just first started I would say you have potential but nvm.

[WanDaMan]

looks stolen to me
not many reasons really, but some obvious reasons that he stole some parts of the level though

[Crono]

Cliffs have tile errors. Look at them yourself.

I should be the last one talking but your paths are way way way too spiked.

Your detail is ugly and the swamps are missing their appropiate corners.

House is kind of ugly and why are you putting walkable tiles in between 1 wall tile? -shrugs-

The back of the house is over a tree but the tree is behind the house o_O;; Since when were small house doors as big as a tree's front?

Water is ugly, deep water is ugly, and the part where the cliff is facing left next to the mushrooms which are next to some fence has a desert floor not grass.

Where are the cliff shadows?

You stole that darkblue super deep water. I know that for 100% because if someone makes this kind of level but can make that kind of leet water (though you clearly showed you suck at deep water to the very left of the level), something is wrong.

4/10

[JohnnyChimpo]

Originally Posted by WanDaMan

looks stolen to me
not many reasons really, but some obvious reasons that he stole some parts of the level though

Lol. Ok WanDa go look for the stolen cliff becausei garentee you wont find it because its not stolen.

And thx for the vicious but honest reply Crono.
And I didnt steal the water either.

[Crono]

By the way one of the fences is going through the base of the mountain, putting a green spot there >_>;

[JohnnyChimpo]

Oh and for the dirt bottem on the ones by the mushrooms. I was originally going to make this lvl a desert lvl but decided not too sence theres not many detail tiles you can use for dirt.

[Nitkizi]

It's very meh. It seems like you used a path gen for the puddles and dirt path. I like to make an outline with the gen, then edit it from there to make it less boxy, but like Crono said, not so spiky. I'll give it a 6.5/10. Decent, but not great.

[DarkShadows_Legend]

Some parts of the level are too cluttered.

The tile errors you're missing are on the cliffs.

Rate : 5/10

[Matman58]

I would say 5/10 because it is just a pretty average level nothing spectacular just jumps out at you.

[dieingtestament]

I give it a 5.
Nothing really breath taking, might want to lose all the bushes, to many for me.
I see errors on the cliffs, on the ground by the dirt decline, the water on the left side, the tree next to the house-use a gfx for that, the shadow of the rock thats on the cliff.
That more help than what haunter gave you?