Thunder bird

[colin012]

Wow I'm back......... Anyways I made a fairly standard pistol. I haven't seen any for a long time so I figured I'd start. So would you shred it for me.

*shrunk barrel and coils on top views.

[Elizabeth]

oya

[doyouskate]

do not want

[colin012]

Originally Posted by Elizabeth

oya

Originally Posted by doyouskate

do not want

These help a lot *Sarcastic sarcastic* Come on I want feed back. What needs work. Goods. Bads. Additions. Things need to be removed? Tell me honestly with substance.

[Minomato]

Originally Posted by colin012

These help a lot *Sarcastic sarcastic* Come on I want feed back. What needs work. Goods. Bads. Additions. Things need to be removed? Tell me honestly with substance.

I like the handles and the side views, but I'm not very keen towards the top views. I don't like how the "blue energy coils" take up so much of the top. Also, the barrel needs some work. It juts out too far, in my opinion.

[colin012]

Originally Posted by Minomato

I like the handles and the side views, but I'm not very keen towards the top views. I don't like how the "blue energy coils" take up so much of the top. Also, the barrel needs some work. It juts out too far, in my opinion.

You make good comments! An ideal example.

[Liberated]

the topviews are birds eyes, they are directly from above, this is not the right perspective for zone, they also seem a bit plain tbh.

[bahamutstevetff]

Originally Posted by Liberated

the topviews are birds eyes, they are directly from above, this is not the right perspective for zone, they also seem a bit plain tbh.

theres plenty of guns with a birdseye veiw in game. RPS and BPS off the top of my head.

[Huwajux]

Originally Posted by colin012

These help a lot *Sarcastic sarcastic* Come on I want feed back. What needs work. Goods. Bads. Additions. Things need to be removed? Tell me honestly with substance.

Uh, dude...it's pretty bad. Be inventive, don't just GFX a pistol shape and then add a few coloured rectangles on it.

[colin012]

Originally Posted by Huwajux

Uh, dude...it's pretty bad. Be inventive, don't just GFX a pistol shape and then add a few coloured rectangles on it.

True. Thank you but the idea was to make it simple. Like for a class weapon. I got sick of gealet things. I will make something crazier next time.

[ceserthen]

Originally Posted by colin012

Wow I'm back......... Anyways I made a fairly standard pistol. I haven't seen any for a long time so I figured I'd start. So would you shred it for me.

*shrunk barrel and coils on top views.

Try to add more overall depth to the shading of the weapon, increase the contrast and try to make shapes by using drastic transition in brightness. Also try to "complicate" the gun a bit ,add stuff so it doesn't look too plain. Also on the top view try to imagine you are looking at something from a round a 45 degree angle, and if your weapon is round try to add that into the dimension in the top view.

[Minomato]

Originally Posted by colin012

Like for a class weapon. I got sick of gealet things.

Pfft, good luck with that. They'll stuff anything they can into that shop for more money, as long as someone out there wants to use it. If not that, then it'll be the rental shop with the blue rifle and such.

[Dante396]

Well... It's not the worst and its not the best Ive seen xD Try to change the bullets.