Wip

excaliber7388 · #1 08-31-2006, 04:41 AM

Okay, I suck at cliffs.
Can someone guide me in the right direction?
Other thatn that, how's this level? I haven't done one in a while so I'm even more rusty than usual.
It looks better when you play, because the waves look better, and they move (scripted)
Also, here's a look at some of the stuff I've recently changed about DR's tileset
Remember, wip

Rapidwolve · #2 08-31-2006, 05:21 AM

Lol I couldnt do any better :]

Sum41Freeeeek · #3 08-31-2006, 05:41 AM

What's a wip?
Like, wipping up a level? lol

I think it looks cool.

Shaun · #4 08-31-2006, 10:57 AM

I'm guessing Work in Progress.

The level is irrational (why are there stump bits there? And a stake? And a fence post?) and the edges look a bit sharp at areas.

There are also tile errors with the water.

Although it's a good start, as it is, I would not give this level a passing grade. It is not acceptable to go online, yet. Keep working on it.

Smoothen out the edges, make it a logical island, and try to add more variety with the island, with how the land touches the water.

Magadal · #5 08-31-2006, 02:19 PM

Well...I dont really like it. Lots of tile errors in the water, and I dont like your cliffing. Wasnt there a cliffing tutorial somewhere on these forums?
Oh, and the tiles in the last two screenshots look totally ugly.

Crono · #6 08-31-2006, 02:28 PM

Wow, tile errors all over water including tileset related errors. The cliff has tile errors, detail is too UN-like, and may I repeat the cliff has tile errors.

The best way to learn how to cliff is to get the pre-defined cliffs and try to join them together. Thats how Wan taught me. XD

smirt362 · #7 08-31-2006, 04:57 PM

I think there are too many rocks in the water in addition to what they said above.

excaliber7388 · #8 08-31-2006, 05:51 PM

Yeah, wip means work in progress

And I'll look around for that tutorial

excaliber7388 · #9 08-31-2006, 10:49 PM

Updates:

Magadal · #10 09-01-2006, 02:09 PM

Still too much tile errors in water and cliffs, and too many stones in the water I think. But the details on the little island are better.

excaliber7388 · #11 09-01-2006, 09:33 PM

Updates! (Tile errors should be gone, but tell me if you see any!)

Crono · #12 09-01-2006, 09:59 PM

Big fat obvious ones...>_> ill post it later if you cant see it already

Angel_Light · #13 09-01-2006, 10:44 PM

I believe I'm fairly good at cliffs XD Gerami if you find anything strike me down! lol but here a gmap I made. Pay attention to the center Island not the ones on the outside (those are made by the level generator not me)

Huwajux · #14 09-02-2006, 02:33 PM

Most are tile errors. The rest just do not look very nice. There may be more.

Crono · #15 09-02-2006, 05:51 PM

Alright watch and learn Huwajux. This is how you spot errors.