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Old 01-24-2010, 09:17 PM
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WIP bottle

Ya, so I took a break from making graphics, and I think I have gotten a little better, or at least I will try to be. What do you think of this bottle WIP? Any thing that I could improve on?


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Old 01-24-2010, 09:24 PM
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The line before the neck of the bottle really bothers me.
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Old 01-24-2010, 09:27 PM
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Old 01-24-2010, 09:45 PM
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I can't see much shine on it either.
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Old 01-24-2010, 10:18 PM
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Old 01-24-2010, 10:35 PM
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The shine should be over the outlines.
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Old 01-24-2010, 10:39 PM
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Old 01-24-2010, 10:53 PM
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I think the shine shoud also curve with the bottle neck now that I look at it.
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Old 01-25-2010, 12:36 AM
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Apart from the white, your bottle has 192 colors, 201 including the white.
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Old 01-25-2010, 01:01 AM
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Apart from the white, your bottle has 192 colors, 201 including the white.
How can you tell?
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Old 01-25-2010, 01:02 AM
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Try adding some crazy perspective; the subject is relatively boring atm.
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He sat down and counted them all.
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Old 01-25-2010, 01:28 AM
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how the hell did you make a bottle with 192 colors ? respect for that lol.
True pixel art takes the minimum color count possible, please reduce it.
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Old 01-25-2010, 01:31 AM
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how the hell did you make a bottle with 192 colors ? respect for that lol.
True pixel art takes the minimum color count possible, please reduce it.
I have never understood this. Pixel count does not matter, what matters is that it looks nice. Using too few colors just makes it look crappy.
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Old 01-25-2010, 01:36 AM
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The bigger the palette the bigger the size. Come on it isnt hard to only use the same EXACT color for the outline instead of 50+ that the human eye can almost not see

And if you somehow got a broken color picker (happened to me once o,o) note down the hexa...
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