Learning Level Design.

[DaBoss]

Hello this is an update of my levels so far

-outside-



-inside-

[Dnegel]

The outside level is better now, but idk about the inside one.

[DrakilorP2P]

They look much better now. I didn't know it was possible to make indoor grass work well but there you go.
The added green and blue in the inside level helps a lot as a contrast to the brown. As for the outside level, removing the square stones and moving the tables made it look more natural I think.

[DaBoss]

Thanlk you so much Draklior

[adam]

I like

[Imperialistic]

Everything I told you to fix before, still needs to be fixed. =/ All you did was change the levels slightly, not even fix what we pointed out.

[coreys]

The inside level looks much better. There isn't much I'd change, other than put some more decoration on the walls so it's not so plain.

The outside level doesn't look very different.

[adam]

Originally Posted by Imperialistic

Everything I told you to fix before, still needs to be fixed. =/ All you did was change the levels slightly, not even fix what we pointed out.

It's fine, your just a little confused. Although I was impressed with your outline, it was a very good way to present your information. Good job!

[papajchris]

in the indoor i think you have some errors with dimensions. How is the box near the door 1/2 under the border, but the tables aren't? Also the grass inside does look nice, and wouldn't think twice about it if i saw it on a server, but sense wise how does grass grow in the inside? Imo i think you have to make it look more jungle like (atleast on the outside) so that it looks like the building was overran by nature (vines, etc.)

Just my opinion, the other people responding are better lats so take their advice over mine

[Switch]

Are you using layers? Usually no one puts a grass-wood floor tiles together, so I'd like to ask that.

Inside: The grass seems like it's too thick to work directly with a wood floor. Maybe try putting a small area of dirt that connects to the floor.
Outside: The grass-stone floor area seems too disheveled. Maybe try making it more planned out, then connect it with a small area of dirt then some grass. Also, still too many windows. Try putting more flowers and stuff in the grass. Not liking the shadow on the wall above the door, either.

Your level has improved a lot, but there are still a few tile errors that really stick out I'll point out.

[DaBoss]

Thank you everyone, and thank you switch..I'll post an update soon.

[Imperialistic]

Don't forget all the tiles errors with the stone path.


@Adam: It's not fine, don't tell him that everything looks good when there is still problems and errors. He is trying to better himself to be a better LAT, and beating around the bush and not telling him the truth wont improve anything. :P

[DaBoss]

Thanks Imp besides the tile errors does it look nice as the style to it?

[Imperialistic]

The outside of the house is decent, the rest of it still looks a bit messy.

[DaBoss]

Alright thanks..I'll post a new update soon for your guys great advice.