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Old 04-12-2006, 03:30 PM
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I posted the one on the right maybe a week ago and got some good feedback on what i should do to make it a bit better. So I fixed everything that I saw, mostly the cliff tile errors. And the new one is on the left side. If you see more tile errors tell me about them so i can fix them.

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Old 04-12-2006, 03:57 PM
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Old 04-12-2006, 06:19 PM
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I like it alot, nice improvements.
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Old 04-13-2006, 02:54 AM
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I posted the one on the right maybe a week ago and got some good feedback on what i should do to make it a bit better. So I fixed everything that I saw, mostly the cliff tile errors. And the new one is on the left side. If you see more tile errors tell me about them so i can fix them.

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I think that those are some great improvements as well. Good job. The only thing that I would personally suggest is maybe changing the dirt tiles a little bit and possibly getting rid of some of the partial swamp tiles? It seems to be a little over crowded, maybe some flowers? Good job though. Keep up the good work
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Old 04-13-2006, 01:47 PM
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Looking at the old one and the new one, and just those slight updates made it alot better. Nice work
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Old 04-13-2006, 04:19 PM
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I still see quite a few tile errors.

I boxed in the areas that really stuck out at me. With your north facing diagonal cliffing, you used only one of the two sets of tiles required to connect the cliffs correctly. I made a small attachment showing the location of the tiles, and how they look if done correctly. Also you need to use the correct border tiles around the tops of these cliffs.

Other than that, you have several errors in how the water around the waterfall is done.
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