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Old 05-08-2011, 07:42 PM
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Hey sup well guys. Since management on era change there app. 24 hours when they post it up. I'm not going to redo my app. So I decide to post it on here give me some feed back on my levels

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i know the last inside its kind of empty but wanted room to pk in
i decided to do some coffins and blood gfx just small but nice i hope you enjoy this
oh its a full level i just have a wide monitor so it displays like that in graal editor
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Old 05-08-2011, 08:17 PM
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I like it, good work.
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Old 05-09-2011, 01:24 AM
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It looks nice, but I'm not so sure about those red lights, the source of them doesn't exactly make sense and you kinda used them in excess. Perhaps you should come up with a new idea to fill out your levels and add more variety. Other then that the shape of building and insides are great. Good job
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Old 05-09-2011, 02:43 AM
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oh the lights sorry im a oldbie i like era better when they had light effects. Chrisz Era i think it was it was in 2001 now graal not big on light effects which i love them idk y they went out of style but still make it look cool i could p[ut a couch ect to fill the level up and a table but it was ment to be a quest i could put baddies in there no problem just didnt want too
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Old 05-09-2011, 03:12 AM
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Lights haven't really gone out of style. While they do make the level look good and all, like I said I think you used them too much and era is the wrong server them for IMO. However don't let my opinion push you around although I do think my point is valid
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Old 05-09-2011, 04:12 AM
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no your ok. I remember when era first started out tthey had alot of light effects ect made it look cool.
but i could make this better just didnt due it was a app and theese levels wont be use
but thanks for the comments
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Old 05-10-2011, 02:54 PM
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Old 05-10-2011, 04:11 PM
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lol i try too but my windows was being *** and didnt want to restart my computer. So i just went with Alt 3
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I like the use of light effects, too.
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lol the server i work on offline i have store. Its alot of lighting but different effect and it looks better.
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Old 05-14-2011, 03:06 PM
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INVISIBLE WALLS AT THE BOTTOM! WHERE ARE THEY!

I have gotten a lot of bad comments on levels I made because of no walls at the bottom.

I like the level, just consider the tip Good Job
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Old 05-14-2011, 10:34 PM
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I remember when there where a lot of those lights..
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Old 05-14-2011, 11:03 PM
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INVISIBLE WALLS AT THE BOTTOM! WHERE ARE THEY!

I have gotten a lot of bad comments on levels I made because of no walls at the bottom.

I like the level, just consider the tip Good Job
i ment to put no walls so i didn't forget it looks better with no walls on the bottom. It's just a personal ref. How they would want them. Like personally they look better and makes more sense but other like it. So some people like the style some people wont like your style thats how its always been.
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Old 05-15-2011, 02:28 AM
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INVISIBLE WALLS AT THE BOTTOM! WHERE ARE THEY!

I have gotten a lot of bad comments on levels I made because of no walls at the bottom.
For a real 2D perspective, and to make the level look better/give more room to work with.. a lot of people prefer to not add walls on the bottom portions of inside levels. It would even be better to not have the second outline he added, but overall the levels look pretty nice. I like the use of imagery in the levels, but the actual tiling (under the layer of images) could use some work.

I like the uproar of Era/Modern levels coming out.. hopefully some good, motivated, and active LATs will be chosen this time around for Era. Might post some of my levels later too and see how they compare.
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