*new composition* Nothing but blue.

Emera · #1 05-18-2011, 05:02 PM

Ok, well, i have been working on this one for nearly 24 hours straight. I think its pretty good, but as usual, i need your guys opinions! Thank you guys for being so positive to all my work on the forums so far! I was asked to make a graal kingdoms/fantasy type of theme. Here it is!

Track title: Nothing but blue.

WanDaMan · #2 05-18-2011, 05:26 PM

Wow, very very impressive!! I really like the build up with the piano and violin! Great job

I've always been a fan of your work!! Keep it up!

Emera · #3 05-18-2011, 05:28 PM

YAY thanks wandaman. It reminds me of lord of the rings. When golem *accidentally* on purpose drops all the *Elven bread* of the edge of mordor.

JesusFreak250 · #4 05-18-2011, 05:42 PM

You know I thought of the exact same thing

Emera · #5 05-18-2011, 05:49 PM

Bell · #6 05-18-2011, 06:25 PM

Pretty good is not even close to how I'd describe it. Its beautiful and absolutely perfect.

Emera · #7 05-18-2011, 06:27 PM

Omfg thanks bell. Means a lot coming from you.

Tigairius · #8 05-18-2011, 06:32 PM

I can tell you tried to follow my advice. It's better than your others, but still can use some work. When I get in touch with you soon we can discuss how you can improve.

Emera · #9 05-18-2011, 06:33 PM

Ok thanks tig.

Emera · #10 05-18-2011, 06:44 PM

Im trying so hard here lol. I love the feedback though guys. Keep it coming. If i keep going at this pace i will have an album by the end of the month. LOL

maximus_asinus · #11 05-18-2011, 06:47 PM

I think it is pretty decent, I love the introduction with the piano and violin. My only complaint is that up until that part -- and this is my own personal opinion -- I thought the piece was going to be different based on the instruments you used and the key you started in. Also I believe the ending is sort of abrupt and if played on loop as most music on Graal is, it would sound odd (if you're not using this for Graal, well it still ends abruptly).

Emera · #12 05-18-2011, 07:01 PM

Ok well, heres my other one. I was unsure wether or not i was going to release it. I don't like to edit the tracks i have made unless they sound dodgy or useless. The only thing i like doing to them is either adding more too it or making a whole new track altogether. Anyway, heres my other one.