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Old 05-21-2009, 09:08 PM
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I do not like your choice of walling, specifically the chimney tiles; I suggest redoing it.
I suggest creating branching-out threads from the main sand path.
I suggest redoing the table so that it is not layered; currently it looks confusing, unrealistic, and error-ridden. I suggest keeping the general shape but making the table one single level.
I suggest adding more seats for players to sit.

I particularly like the way you built the legs under the seat in the bottom left of your level.

I would like to note your thin grass "island" in the bottom middle of your dirt path. There is a tile that you can use in the middle to help corner both sides. See my attachment.
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