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It looks nice =) Except I'm a little confused. Last I remember, Okiara with the goddess the Zormites worshipped. I have the story saved in a text document, I think it was written by Chaokir Sutekh Abydos. Should I forget it and endeaver to learn this new one? Just as the Celestus I'd like to be an expert =)
This was it;
We all know of the 8 gods of Graal. But before their time, lived a Goddess much greater. Okiara, she was the mother of all of life. She was what everything on Graal was born from. In the early times, there was nothing. nd it remained like this for generations. Then, from the vast nothingness, came a great something. This something would change the entire existence of Graal. This something took a form which suited it well. It became a stunningly beautiful woman with flowing blue hair, and eyes the color of ocean mist. Again, the world went into stagnation, and Okiara was by herself. One day, she was inspired to create herself a companion. From her , sprang a parrot , one with plumage of gold and blue hues, which would put all who gazed upon it in a state of awe. One more, the state of nothing big happened began. Okiara was happy with herself, and with her companion. After many millennia, the bird which Okiara created , as most creatures do, passed on. After seeing this, Okiara wept over the body of her poor dead companion. Okiara decided she should make a monument, a permanent remembrance of her friend. She dipped her hands into the nothingness, and brought up the land. She looked down at the land, and saw how plain it was. Taking the orb of land, she brought it to her lips, and breathed life into it. And all the creatures of Graal were born from this land. She so enjoyed the new creatures on this land, she longed to be with them. So, she became one with the land. Her Hair became the skies and her eyes the clouds, from which rains pour. He body, became the oceans , the rivers, the lakes, and the streams. And life flourished on this tiny planet for many years. But, soon people forgot about her, all the nations turned form her, except the nation of Zormite. Wanting to honor the Zormite, she gave them the ability to be with her, to breathe in the water, to live with their goddess. The Zormites traveled on land and water at will, some of the uneducated barbaric people assumed the Zormites to be Fish-people. |