01-17-2007, 10:27 PM
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Join Date: May 2004
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 10,410
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The entire face, most specifically the lips, are pushed too far to the right of the page. That's not unusual with newer artists (concentrating on features and not the whole face). He's got lots of time to learn, and he's got the shadow pretty good - texture of the hair looks good. |
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