03-24-2006, 04:23 AM
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I Fight Bears
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: CT, USA
Posts: 2,197
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Simplistic, but a good start. Very simplistic though. Little to no tile errors and some very minor experimentation with some interesting stuff. I'm not going to rate it, instead just say again:a nice start, keep practicing. |
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A poet never takes notes. You never take notes in a love affair.
Robert Frost
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