
03-23-2006, 01:31 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2001
Location: Perth, Australia
Posts: 415
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Not a bad start. There isn't really any visual tile errors but it is quite bland.
Try mixing up your ground detailing a little bit more instead of having big groups of the same thing. Also try not and use to many of the bold tiles like mushroom and stones.. they can take away from the level a little. Try making a small group of trees, it fills up space and gives it a nicer feel than several single ones (then add 1 or 2 single). 1 other thing.. with the water lining, try and mix the directions up a lil more.. so you don't have to many of the same tiles in a row.. and to many stones in water too.. in a small area like that maybe 2 or 3 max.
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