LAT Level (Application)
 

Hi Its me Archaiz but im on my other account on the forum because my real one has gone strange any way I was told to post my level here to see if I can be an LAT on Zone its only basic but please Send me some feed back and i'll edit it




http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/2...archaizkb5.png


Thank You
Nom.

Extremely basic. Try and get a logical layout. For example, the bullet barriers would not be all huddled in the top left region, they would be strategically placed.

Try to detail it a bit more.

Detail? With Zone tiles? But...wait, nvm..

Holy crap haven't seen you in ages

It is basic, and by the looks of it, a base like that wouldn't be very practical for people who want to avoid things.

try adding a little detail and change the opening and the stuff around it since it looks like base 2 btw where did you find the zone tileset?

Ok i've improved it Jo Xandau Said it was good so here it is (I have edited once again) i edited after Anubis secondly commented)

http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/2...rchaiz1wi0.png (Part 1)

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/6...rchaiz2em9.png (Part 2) (Above the base)

More detail yes, but I see a few tile errors in the snow and the top of the base has no real purpose and most bases have a purpose of being there, maybe put a fence on top and add some barrels.

Don't do random placement. Look what happened to the current CTF, doors are blocked by incorrectly placed barrels.

Your cliffs are incorrectly made I can't make them correctly though so I shouldn't be talking. You also forgot the corner tiles on the roof. You may also want to work on the placement of the objects. Also for a more complex feel try using the silvery tiles with the brown ones to provide variation. Try using the laying down barrels and if you post the actual level I may give you some examples though i can't exactly give a good one. And generally all the bases have tiles around them surrounded by that border thing. Try walking around on artic and other levels for an example.Also the thickness should be the same on the base height or else it would be slanting and we would fall of :p. Please post the NW and I will try to show you what I mean because I understand im very unclear :D Im just trying to help with suggestions though I may not be a good person to give the examples etc... What you should think is how would this look as compared to the normal zone stuff. Other than that it looks great!

Edit: I tryed to give an example but all my levels were messed up.

If your going to mention me, please, spell my name right. Theres still a lot for you to learn, (Not saying that i know everything) and i don't think zones in much need for LATs right now, if it was then i'd have my nose up that line of work because i love to LAT.

Jonah!

Could someone tell me how to get the Zone tileset?

here you go

http://forums.graalonline.com/forums...ad.php?t=72107

http://forums.graalonline.com/forums...ad.php?t=62129

between the two that should be enough