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Luda 04-05-2006 02:39 AM

cove like level
 
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I guess it's a cove i donno but rate if u want. I didn't go into too much detail and im not sure if the right side of the long cliffs is a tile error :whatever:


::UPDATE::
added some detail to it, tell me what you think
it's the 2nd screenshot

Chicken_l33t 04-05-2006 04:07 AM

I like it. The minimum detail works, perhaps a little more in the lower right corner and maybe add something to fill that part up a bit then it'd look good.

The detailing is very classic and nice :) the beach is nice aswell good work :D

Zero Hour 04-05-2006 05:29 AM

That really screwed up my eyes when I first saw it, I thought, "What... I don't understand this second section" (the grass below the second level).

I feel the reason for this is because of the water on the second level - you would think that, since it's a cove there wouldn't be grass down the bottom with water, aswell as a baren play on the mid level with no grass and just water.

But I'm confident the majority of you will disagree.

CidNight1142 04-05-2006 05:34 AM

I like it alot, actually. A bit more detail in that bottom right corner and fix up a few small tile errors that I think I spotted. I'll give you a score if you put a bit more detail there of 8.5/10. Really neat.

protagonist 04-05-2006 06:11 AM

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Originally Posted by Zero Hour
That really screwed up my eyes when I first saw it, I thought, "What... I don't understand this second section" (the grass below the second level).

I feel the reason for this is because of the water on the second level - you would think that, since it's a cove there wouldn't be grass down the bottom with water, aswell as a baren play on the mid level with no grass and just water.

But I'm confident the majority of you will disagree.

Ya shut up ZH you know nothing do your own elvel

Crono 04-05-2006 01:59 PM

It's ok. Better detail is needed, I don't like the southern beach+grass style, and the cliff has some errors. As a matter of fact I'm not a fan of that kind of cliff joining. :(

Draenin 04-05-2006 09:25 PM

I take Gerami's judgement here, Zero's in Graphic Arts.

CidNight1142 04-06-2006 12:01 AM

Second screenshot is good. Just the right amount of detail. Not sure if I'm right, but I like it.

DARKVILLIN 04-07-2006 04:49 AM

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alright, i guess ill give my input. Lets start off with...
A: This area...just my suggestion, maybe smooth out the darker sand tiles. It looks really bumpy...Some may like it, so just my suggestion. *shrug*
B: I realize you cut off the shadows on the cliffs, but if you're going to use the "bumpy" dark sand effects as i mentioned above, i suggest finish the style, dont make those flat...creats a weird contrast with the rest of the dark sand tiles
C: You're level kinda messed with my eyes as well. Just another suggestion..id recommend keeping shadows one direction. only place i noticed though.

besides my few comments, which as i always say you can take or brush off-its your level- I like the lack of heavy detail.

Zero Hour 04-07-2006 04:54 AM

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Originally Posted by protagonist
Ya shut up ZH you know nothing do your own elvel

I'm pretty confident the majority of hardcore level developers believed you meant that sincerely :P

Eagle 04-07-2006 04:59 AM

I like it, though I have 1 complaint.

I don't like the swamp below your cliff. It needs the endings, or something..

Vega001 04-23-2006 07:52 AM

i give it 9.8/10 i think its better than any of my work, i really like it alot, even the one without much detail seemed really nice. i liked how you did the cliffs well, and the grass and dark dirt patches were outstanding.

i can't find anything bad except i would've added more detail to the plain grass in the south

Magadal 04-24-2006 03:08 PM

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Originally Posted by DARKVILLIN
C: You're level kinda messed with my eyes as well. Just another suggestion..id recommend keeping shadows one direction. only place i noticed though.


It is one direction. The shadow goes north.

petro1212 05-04-2006 01:08 PM

It's nice, theres not much to say about it. And as for the people that try their best to point out any errors (no matter how small) let them talk. They mostly suck at assorting a bunch of tiles together (aka Leveling) and get off on making others look bad.

9/10 ;) Its a clean, "simple" ... yadayadayada.. its just nice ;)

maximus_asinus 05-04-2006 03:29 PM

#1. Stop reviving this thread! It was posted on April 4th. It is now May 4th, this thread is passed its life expectancy.

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Originally Posted by petro1212
It's nice, theres not much to say about it. And as for the people that try their best to point out any errors (no matter how small) let them talk. They mostly suck at assorting a bunch of tiles together (aka Leveling) and get off on making others look bad.

9/10 ;) Its a clean, "simple" ... yadayadayada.. its just nice ;)

I do this quite frequently actually, as did Wan, and a few others, and I'm pretty sure we're not bad tilers. Its called helpful and constructive criticism. The only reason I never posted in this thread earlier is because I was talking to him privately for help.


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