lvl dawg
 

Well I have improved my level making skills some. I wanted to see what the community thinks.

I have used this level to tryout for LAT on servers I was interested in. I choose to use this because it shows more than a handful of tiles I can use.

I want to get better, that is the main reason I am posting this. If you don't like it, I would appreciate it if you told me what you don't like, and if there's a way to fix it.

Here it is. :cool:

I like it, looks great. :)

First thing I've noticed, just from looking at the thumbnail: That pond is far to small to produce such a large waterfall.

lol I guess hes right, haunt ther is. Waterfall should be only about 2 tiles high and it should be set lower. But it seems everyone doesnt know how to place a damn waterfall these days. Guess theyve never seen one.

...Now grading your level lol. eh your grass detail is somthing I dont like much. Kinda overused a few tiles. House is pretty odd. Basic outline of the level seems pretty cool though.

Nicely structured, I think those greenish tiles at the base of your house look rather unpleasant and make your house look strange. 7/10

Your general constructions are nice but you should improve your detailing. (Should/could.. whatever) Anyhow, I also saw some tile-errors but thats just a matter of interpetation.

Your buidling also doing's look very pleasing, avoid having a small/thin top like you have right now. (Again, my opinion) It makes your building look rediciously high for some reason.

Personaly I hate it when people do the water/stone transfer like you just did. If you realy want to do that try editing the tile i'll post an example when I get out of my "sunday morning" (its night already but who's counting) mood.

Lol Eagle you are showing off that level too much