Rate my new lebel!!
 

k. I tried again after doing tutorial.

Straight is bad. As are tile errors. Your level is littered with both straightness and tile errors... Actually more like plauged... Try working those out.

Looks like you stole some of the water bits bud...
:)

Yea lots of tile errors O_o

wow thats all im going to say ......

I've seen this level somewhere...

UN? XD.
Anyway, yea, you don't have to cram a whole island into one level.

2 for trying
o.o
since I can tell you tried... the only real suggestion I can think of, is to keep making levels, and you'll get better as you go on (hopfully) You have some of the right ideas, but I think you just need a little more experience.

Best suggestion I could give you is don't make the level so crowded.