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King homer daStupid 12-09-2010 03:45 AM

So Rusty :(
 
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Okay so I haven't made a level in awhile and I (tried) using the LttP tileset because it looked neat, what do you think?

Things to note:
  • I made some minor edits in paint, I suppose that's cheating but I'm a bit of a perfectionist.
  • I personally don't like the coastal cliffs, but I wanted to get all of the dock in the level so that's what I ended up with.
  • I don't even know why I added that dock, it's abit plain -- I suppose I wanted to make the village aspect more realistic.
  • Credit goes to UN for the fish images, and of course Nintendo for the tileset n_n

Bubble13 12-09-2010 03:49 AM

Wow, I wish I was this rusty.

DemonSpawnn 12-09-2010 03:55 AM

It looks really nice!

It was hard for me to find anything that should be changed, but if anything I would recommend centering the bird statue by moving it up a little bit.
I have never used this tileset so I'm not sure if you can do this but, the railings on the stairs from the dock level to the upper level, could they have a better top?

RegretZ 12-09-2010 04:13 AM

Can I hire you? XD

MysticX2X 12-09-2010 05:45 AM

nice job

Elk 12-09-2010 07:26 AM

looks awesome

Deas_Voice 12-09-2010 11:24 AM

awesome work

Fulg0reSama 12-09-2010 11:28 AM

Nice island. I agree about the bird being slight off place. I smell a good tile and(and perhaps a third of a tile) off.

Dnegel 12-09-2010 05:24 PM

Sweet

Crono 12-09-2010 06:34 PM

good work. some minor errors here and there but good tiling + style. :)

Fulg0reSama 12-09-2010 06:37 PM

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Originally Posted by King homer daStupid (Post 1615544)
  • Credit goes to UN for the fish images, and of course Nintendo for the tileset n_n

Those fish look like they came from Eskimo Bob.

Kamaeru 12-09-2010 11:20 PM

Nice job. When professionally done, a level can use a few errors here and there if the leveler is conscious of the alteration and wishes it to be that way. That's my opinion.

I don't see any unexcused errors. The only thing I don't like is the "8" rock and its placement.

Soala 12-09-2010 11:34 PM

I really like this one level, amazing job Xelt :)

Crono 12-10-2010 12:20 AM

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Originally Posted by Kamaeru (Post 1615621)
Nice job. When professionally done, a level can use a few errors here and there if the leveler is conscious of the alteration and wishes it to be that way. That's my opinion.

I don't see any unexcused errors. The only thing I don't like is the "8" rock and its placement.

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scooter123 12-10-2010 03:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by King homer daStupid (Post 1615544)
Okay so I haven't made a level in awhile and I (tried) using the LttP tileset because it looked neat, what do you think?

Things to note:
  • I made some minor edits in paint, I suppose that's cheating but I'm a bit of a perfectionist.
  • I personally don't like the coastal cliffs, but I wanted to get all of the dock in the level so that's what I ended up with.
  • I don't even know why I added that dock, it's abit plain -- I suppose I wanted to make the village aspect more realistic.
  • Credit goes to UN for the fish images, and of course Nintendo for the tileset n_n

I think you should fix that bartender right at the bottom. It doesn't look right at the spot :(


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