Chair and a blade
 

I'm trying to get better. Some helpful tips would be greatly appreciated :D

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/7...dnblacemt9.png

The blade needs a handle, and the chairs look like the angle they are at is far too ... well I don't know how to explain it.

Instead of having diagonal lines for the chairs to make it look like you are farther away from it, make them slightly straighter.

Aight, I'll fix that when I get a chance.

Chairs are at a bad angle. The backs of the chairs don't correspond correctly with the seats.

Graal doesn't comply to the laws of perspective. Would these work well in an actual level?

the blade looks really cool :O
on the chairs i dont like the perspektive ^^

Yea, the chairs perspective is weird. Like theres a focus point in the back, and the closer towards the focus point, the smaller the image is. You want more of a up/down look to it.