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King homer daStupid 12-09-2010 03:45 AM

So Rusty :(
 
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Okay so I haven't made a level in awhile and I (tried) using the LttP tileset because it looked neat, what do you think?

Things to note:
  • I made some minor edits in paint, I suppose that's cheating but I'm a bit of a perfectionist.
  • I personally don't like the coastal cliffs, but I wanted to get all of the dock in the level so that's what I ended up with.
  • I don't even know why I added that dock, it's abit plain -- I suppose I wanted to make the village aspect more realistic.
  • Credit goes to UN for the fish images, and of course Nintendo for the tileset n_n

Bubble13 12-09-2010 03:49 AM

Wow, I wish I was this rusty.

DemonSpawnn 12-09-2010 03:55 AM

It looks really nice!

It was hard for me to find anything that should be changed, but if anything I would recommend centering the bird statue by moving it up a little bit.
I have never used this tileset so I'm not sure if you can do this but, the railings on the stairs from the dock level to the upper level, could they have a better top?

RegretZ 12-09-2010 04:13 AM

Can I hire you? XD

MysticX2X 12-09-2010 05:45 AM

nice job

Elk 12-09-2010 07:26 AM

looks awesome

Deas_Voice 12-09-2010 11:24 AM

awesome work

Fulg0reSama 12-09-2010 11:28 AM

Nice island. I agree about the bird being slight off place. I smell a good tile and(and perhaps a third of a tile) off.

Dnegel 12-09-2010 05:24 PM

Sweet

Crono 12-09-2010 06:34 PM

good work. some minor errors here and there but good tiling + style. :)

Fulg0reSama 12-09-2010 06:37 PM

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Originally Posted by King homer daStupid (Post 1615544)
  • Credit goes to UN for the fish images, and of course Nintendo for the tileset n_n

Those fish look like they came from Eskimo Bob.

Kamaeru 12-09-2010 11:20 PM

Nice job. When professionally done, a level can use a few errors here and there if the leveler is conscious of the alteration and wishes it to be that way. That's my opinion.

I don't see any unexcused errors. The only thing I don't like is the "8" rock and its placement.

Soala 12-09-2010 11:34 PM

I really like this one level, amazing job Xelt :)

Crono 12-10-2010 12:20 AM

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Originally Posted by Kamaeru (Post 1615621)
Nice job. When professionally done, a level can use a few errors here and there if the leveler is conscious of the alteration and wishes it to be that way. That's my opinion.

I don't see any unexcused errors. The only thing I don't like is the "8" rock and its placement.

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scooter123 12-10-2010 03:44 AM

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Originally Posted by King homer daStupid (Post 1615544)
Okay so I haven't made a level in awhile and I (tried) using the LttP tileset because it looked neat, what do you think?

Things to note:
  • I made some minor edits in paint, I suppose that's cheating but I'm a bit of a perfectionist.
  • I personally don't like the coastal cliffs, but I wanted to get all of the dock in the level so that's what I ended up with.
  • I don't even know why I added that dock, it's abit plain -- I suppose I wanted to make the village aspect more realistic.
  • Credit goes to UN for the fish images, and of course Nintendo for the tileset n_n

I think you should fix that bartender right at the bottom. It doesn't look right at the spot :(

King homer daStupid 12-14-2010 06:16 PM

Thanks for your comments!
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Originally Posted by DemonSpawnn (Post 1615547)
I would recommend centering the bird statue by moving it up a little bit.

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Originally Posted by Fulg0reSama (Post 1615576)
I agree about the bird being slight off place.

Oh yeah, you're right. Originally it was another statue that went there (the Aztec looking one) but I decided to change it last minute, I'll correct that.
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Originally Posted by DemonSpawnn (Post 1615547)
the railings on the stairs from the dock level to the upper level, could they have a better top?

I see what you mean about the top of those pillar railings, I tried looking but couldn't find anything that matches it - I'll have another look, though.
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Originally Posted by Fulg0reSama (Post 1615576)
I smell a good tile and(and perhaps a third of a tile) off.

Huh?
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Originally Posted by Crono (Post 1615639)
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Oh ****, my bad...fixed.
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Originally Posted by scooter123 (Post 1615660)
I think you should fix that bartender right at the bottom. It doesn't look right at the spot :(

What needs fixing? You mean he needs to be more center or just remove the whole stall?

Vima 12-15-2010 11:04 PM

I love it, I love your style and I think you are waaaay better than the overrated WDM :]

Crono 12-15-2010 11:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Vima (Post 1616351)
I love it, I love your style and I think you are waaaay better than the overrated WDM :]

Xelt's style indirectly derives from this "overrated WDM".


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