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trifle 01-02-2008 03:35 AM

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Originally Posted by Stephen (Post 1367491)
The proportions of his facial features are really pretty disturbing.

oh well.. this is the style I want to go with.
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/4...racter2fg2.jpg

Switch 01-02-2008 04:26 AM

Much better.

Elk 01-02-2008 04:57 AM

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Originally Posted by Stephen (Post 1367491)
The proportions of his facial features are really pretty disturbing.

What Stephen is trying to say is, that he looks like an old man or a zombie or a beetles head

trifle 01-02-2008 05:27 AM

I'd rather hear what Stefpen means then you using his name for what you think.
Besides, I am looking for constructive crits, not just gibberish.

cbk1994 01-02-2008 05:30 AM

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Originally Posted by trifle (Post 1367504)
oh well.. this is the style I want to go with.
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/4...racter2fg2.jpg

It's very nice, except the ear needs some work ... It's too ... straight ... or something.

Stephen 01-02-2008 12:36 PM

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Originally Posted by trifle (Post 1367525)
I'd rather hear what Stefpen means then you using his name for what you think.

Actually, he's dead on.
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Originally Posted by trifle (Post 1367525)
Besides, I am looking for constructive crits, not just gibberish.

I guess if you consider "The proportions of his facial features are really pretty disturbing" gibberish, you either live within the Mensa facility, or a trailer.

Obviously I think the proportion of his facial features (mouth, nose, eyes, & their locations) are off - so much so that I find it disturbing... it really doesn't get anymore clear than that x_x

trifle 01-02-2008 04:08 PM

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Originally Posted by cbkbud (Post 1367528)
It's very nice, except the ear needs some work ... It's too ... straight ... or something.

I agree, I will fix it eventually.

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Originally Posted by Stephen (Post 1367588)
Obviously I think the proportion of his facial features (mouth, nose, eyes, & their locations) are off - so much so that I find it disturbing... it really doesn't get anymore clear than that x_x

Very well, your oppinion. Besides, I thought Elk's post was giberrish, not yours.
And if you look at graal characters, the propotions are very much off. I'm not going for a realistic human here, but an extream.

Stephen 01-02-2008 05:19 PM

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Originally Posted by trifle (Post 1367620)
I agree, I will fix it eventually.



Very well, your oppinion. Besides, I thought Elk's post was giberrish, not yours.
And if you look at graal characters, the propotions are very much off. I'm not going for a realistic human here, but an extream.

You ask for criticism, but when you receive you instead justify yourself?

You're not ready for criticism, I'd say. x_x

trifle 01-02-2008 05:30 PM

I am ready to take the crits if I do something wrong, but if its a matter of taste, it's something else I think. You just don't like the propotions, but I ment it to be that way. If I had drawn shadows wrong or something, I would take it.

Crow 01-02-2008 05:49 PM

I think you have to get rid of the black lines in the ear.

ceserthen 01-02-2008 07:24 PM

The Ear looks a bit off laterally, or maybe its just me.

Chompy 01-02-2008 08:55 PM

sykt fett trifle :D

Very nice :O That looks like an awesome.. elf? ^^

trifle 01-03-2008 04:06 AM

I will fix the ear.
(takker ja, og godt nytt år) thanks Chompy :D

cbk1994 01-03-2008 06:23 AM

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Originally Posted by trifle (Post 1367793)
(takker ja, og godt nytt år)

Stop the gibberish and get back to work! :pluffy:

Laek2007 01-03-2008 05:47 PM

Way to go triffle.

Strunta i vissa idioters kommentarer speciellt Elk. Han är en åsna! :D

But I think the ear needs some work aswell, as previous posters noticed aswell.


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