Gun -- NO FLAMING AT MY HORRIBLE...NESS

Switch · #1 08-28-2007, 03:15 AM

And here it is.

No saying it's bad. If you do I want cunstructive critisism.

I'm newb (

!YAY!

) at GFXing so I don't want you to say "You suck."

Also, I made a small one at first, so I also made a big one (same exact stuff only bigger)... I'll post both.

Horrified · #2 08-28-2007, 03:20 AM

You suck.</joke>

Nice first attempt though, better then I could ever do. Maybe make it a bit shinier

Switch · #3 08-28-2007, 03:24 AM

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Originally Posted by Horrified

Nice first attempt though, better then I could ever do. Maybe make it a bit shinier

It's supposed to be a pistol...
I based it off a machine pistol in Wikipedia :o
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Machine_pistol (top one is what I based on)

Also I didn't have enough space to make it "oh so shiny"

Really, think:
Are any guns on Graal shiny?

Another also:
Which one you think is better

smirt362 · #4 08-28-2007, 03:24 AM

Triggers and the the little guard around them are round, not square.

Switch · #5 08-28-2007, 03:34 AM

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Originally Posted by smirt362

Triggers and the the little guard around them are round, not square.

Done, for both.

Now, people:
TELL ME WHICH IS BETTER SO I DON'T WASTE MY TIME ON BOTH!!

Horrified · #6 08-28-2007, 03:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Switch

It's supposed to be a pistol...
I based it off a machine pistol in Wikipedia :o
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Machine_pistol (top one is what I based on)

Also I didn't have enough space to make it "oh so shiny"

Really, think:
Are any guns on Graal shiny?

Another also:
Which one you think is better

1) don't just do what other graaal players have done, go further then that, SHINYNESS OK

2) I like the bigger one

Switch · #7 08-28-2007, 03:46 AM

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Originally Posted by Horrified

1) don't just do what other graaal players have done, go further then that, SHINYNESS OK

You have to remember the shininess comes from up top, where my imagined sun is.

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2) I like the bigger one

Hmm... I like smaller one more cuz it looks less pillowed

Thrashsoul3 · #8 08-28-2007, 04:00 AM

There is no barrel and the upper frame is too large compared to the handle and the trigger.

Switch · #9 08-28-2007, 04:04 AM

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Originally Posted by Thrashsoul3

There is no barrel

pistol... look at an image of one (link i posted before)

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the upper frame is too large compared to the handle and the trigger.

That's a vote for the small one then xD
The big one is what u were looking at...

Sage_Shadowbane · #10 08-28-2007, 05:10 AM

Well, basically.. you have a bit of a potential, I dont even think I could make guns when I was beginning pixel art. But anyways, This image just seems to be a bit too plain/desaturated/boxy. Try to be a bit more creative with your lines and remember you are making things for a game. I did a very quick edit of your gun (not the best in the world, but hey). I basically altered your colors and lines very quickly just to show you how much you could improve this piece without using much effort. Anyways.. Have a look.

xXziroXx · #11 08-28-2007, 05:45 AM

Looks perfect!

.... for a flare gun.

Switch · #12 08-28-2007, 06:18 PM

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Originally Posted by Sage_Shadowbane

Well, basically.. you have a bit of a potential, I dont even think I could make guns when I was beginning pixel art. But anyways, This image just seems to be a bit too plain/desaturated/boxy. Try to be a bit more creative with your lines and remember you are making things for a game. I did a very quick edit of your gun (not the best in the world, but hey). I basically altered your colors and lines very quickly just to show you how much you could improve this piece without using much effort. Anyways.. Have a look.

LOL thanks

Also use the smaller one please I dislike the bigger one

And your image looks nothing like my Russian Stechkin APS pistol

Switch · #13 08-28-2007, 06:19 PM

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Originally Posted by xXziroXx

Looks perfect!
(spaces :o)
.... for a flare gun.

Very nice -_-

Kirble · #14 08-28-2007, 07:41 PM

Try to add more variation in the colours, do add some shine but from a definitive light source, like the one that Sage did, but rather than using such dark colours at the front, lighten them up a tad to define the front end of the gun.

Switch · #15 08-28-2007, 07:48 PM

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Originally Posted by Kirble

Try to add more variation in the colours, do add some shine but from a definitive light source, like the one that Sage did, but rather than using such dark colours at the front, lighten them up a tad to define the front end of the gun.

True...

I didn't want it to look pillowed and it was really small to begin...