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Old 03-06-2005, 07:35 PM
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WIP Level

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Rate it SENSIBLY 1-10 on what is done
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Old 03-06-2005, 07:37 PM
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Sexy! 8, cause I have seen better, but ALOT more worse xD
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Old 03-06-2005, 08:18 PM
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The dirt to grass tiles look a bit plain, try curving it at some points or something, because it looks too boring. Cliff needs to be more flexible, by that I mean more random and some part sticking out more.

Detail needs work, too many bushes, I like the use of trees, good job with the shadow perspective, I see tile errors on the beach (someone else will probably mark it for you), too many dirt rocks.

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Old 03-06-2005, 11:56 PM
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Like i said WIP

The beach tiles are fixed and the cliffs... can't be fixed without redoing the whole level

Update: possibly done
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Old 03-07-2005, 12:07 AM
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i will give it a 7.5, with what they said, the cliffs standout out too much, and then there is the error on the beach, other than that i like it.
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Old 03-07-2005, 12:32 AM
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Grass needs to be clumped, not spread out like that. It will look much nicer.
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Old 03-07-2005, 03:58 PM
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i will give it a 7.5, with what they said, the cliffs standout out too much, and then there is the error on the beach, other than that i like it.
Are you looking at the first one or the second one?

The second one i'd call done
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Old 03-07-2005, 03:59 PM
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Why do you convert to bitmap?
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Old 03-07-2005, 05:03 PM
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Get giffy, it turns bmps into GIFs. Since GIFs don't have too many colors you shouldn't use them for screenshots with lights in them.
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Old 03-07-2005, 05:23 PM
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It should never be a bitmap to begin with.
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Old 03-07-2005, 06:17 PM
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Old 03-07-2005, 06:19 PM
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I don't really like the _|- shape of the cliff, but it seems like itll turn out to be a decent level.
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Old 03-07-2005, 09:03 PM
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Are you looking at the first one or the second one?

The second one i'd call done
I'm talking about the second one. :/
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Old 03-07-2005, 09:13 PM
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You know I hate it when people use tons of those "different" grass tiles and they never use any normal green ones. I like the idea, but you have too much open space. The cliff tiles aren't bad.
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Old 03-07-2005, 10:58 PM
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You know I hate it when people use tons of those "different" grass tiles and they never use any normal green ones.
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