Era Outside level.

warriors94 · #1 03-23-2010, 01:13 AM

I finished this a while ago and sent it in for Era. No I did not get the position, but then again, it was my first modern outside level. Personally I have no idea how to make one of these, as I usually use pics2, but I thought I'd try it out.
Feedback, Comments, Suggestions, Etc.

Imperialistic · #2 03-23-2010, 01:16 AM

I enjoy the level, I just think their should be more grass before the sand starts.
I don't care for the little puddle or hedges on the left side, makes it look cheesy. Also, the roads should be a bit bigger.. other than that I like it.

DarkCloud_PK · #3 03-23-2010, 05:20 AM

if that were a real street intersection, you'd be responsible for a lot of car accidents

Sinkler · #4 03-23-2010, 06:01 AM

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Originally Posted by DarkCloud_PK

if that were a real street intersection, you'd be responsible for a lot of car accidents

agreed.

MrName · #5 03-23-2010, 01:13 PM

I would like to see this somehow in the server, I have to agree taht there should be more grass before you get sand.. And yes, Dangerous street :O

Dnegel · #6 03-23-2010, 05:08 PM

It's good for a first level made with Era's tileset.

warriors94 · #7 03-24-2010, 02:23 AM

Added benches and some paper on the sidewalk.

Liberated · #8 03-24-2010, 09:39 AM

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Added benches and some paper on the sidewalk.

nice, but paper would be generated by the server wouldn't it?

Imperialistic · #9 03-24-2010, 10:42 AM

You totally ignored any criticism we gave to you, review the thread again.. and try to resolve the flaws that others see in your level.

TheJames · #10 03-24-2010, 03:32 PM

The curves in the sand/water are bit of an overkill..

KrimsonSky · #11 03-24-2010, 10:28 PM

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Originally Posted by TheJames

The curves in the sand/water are bit of an overkill..

Idk, it seems like it would look pretty good if he didn't [probably] rush though it.

warriors94 · #12 03-26-2010, 01:09 AM

Yes I did kind of rush it.
Jave L. Cross (shyguy2) showed me one of his levels and thats how he made his water. I really haven't been taught how to do it otherwise. And I did take some of the criticism, as I removed the small pond.
Now here I have tried to move the sand away from the grass, but it's quite hard as the water has to be large due to Era's terrible tileset.

Dnegel · #13 03-27-2010, 01:57 AM

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Originally Posted by warriors94

but it's quite hard as the water has to be large due to Era's terrible tileset.

Conflict incoming.