My level

OiRodgar · #1 11-26-2009, 08:36 PM

What do you think? What could I change?

EDIT: Okay, wait. Somehow I can't do screenshots xD
EDIT2: It should work now.

Door · #2 11-26-2009, 08:40 PM

Add more depth to the snow palace, it looks good but needs a bit more contrast considering the severity of the blizzard

Eagle · #3 11-27-2009, 09:28 AM

Kind of simple, I like it though.

Spark910 · #4 11-27-2009, 08:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Door

Add more depth to the snow palace, it looks good but needs a bit more contrast considering the severity of the blizzard

Snow

Imperialistic · #5 11-29-2009, 08:46 AM

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Originally Posted by Spark910

Snow

I second the question!

Samposse · #6 11-29-2009, 12:23 PM

im giving u 4/10

Door · #7 11-29-2009, 05:43 PM

okay now that there is actually a screencap there and not a blank white image file (I THOUGHT HE WAS JOKING), I will give a real critique!

I'm not sure I like your poles in the middle of the room. What is their purpose? I have the same feeling about those little squares you seem to have around the corners. Maybe if you provide for us a purpose for this level, these little bits of kibble would make perfect sense, but as just a person looking at a random level, I can't say I appreciate them myself.

Darlene159 · #8 11-29-2009, 05:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Door

I'm not sure I like your poles in the middle of the room. What is their purpose?

Same here. They seem to just be......there.

maximus_asinus · #9 11-29-2009, 05:49 PM

I assume they're support columns for the ceiling but they're so sporadic it looks wrong.

Codein · #10 11-29-2009, 05:56 PM

I don't like it much at all. Everything seems so random.

Why is the carpet's edge so random?

Why are there random sized support beams in random locations?

Why are there random rugs about?

When furnishing a room, things are rarely placed at random and are carefully placed in order. Sure, people will say it looks boring but why? Shouldn't people be aiming for some kind of realism to entice even a small amount of emmersion?

Jcs1919 · #11 12-01-2009, 01:20 PM

6/10 for me

Imperialistic · #12 12-01-2009, 07:03 PM

2/10 if you want to consider the horrible perspective.
3/10 if you don't want to consider the horrible perspective.

OiRodgar · #13 12-01-2009, 11:30 PM

thanks for the critique. I will see what I can do better next time.

Dnegel · #14 12-01-2009, 11:59 PM

Good luck.

Samposse · #15 12-03-2009, 11:03 AM

to make the level beter so shoud you add some npc's/images in the middle
like an chouge or something