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Old 07-16-2009, 09:13 AM
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new body WIP

Always fun (or frustrating) to try to make a body. Played around for a little and came up with this.

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C&C please, had quite a bit of trouble getting feet to look right, don't know how I feel about them still so looking for pointers in that direction
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Old 07-16-2009, 09:28 AM
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Upper body looks cool so far, I don't think the feet should be in that perspective though. They also seem alot big, unless you are going for clown feet. :o
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Old 07-16-2009, 09:33 AM
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Looks like a duck. Torso + feet, no legs.
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Old 07-16-2009, 11:16 AM
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Yeah. I agree with these guys. The upper body looks great to me, but doesn't seen like any legs and the feet are massive!

However, I suppose that this body proves that big feet just equals big shoes.

Nice work, fc.
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Old 07-16-2009, 11:17 AM
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1st one is yours, 2nd one is as how graal legs are, they don't really have feet.
3rd is smaller feet.

I think your original feet were too large and in the wrong perspective, maybe you can get some ideas from this on how to change it if you're going to.
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Old 07-16-2009, 12:08 PM
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the guy in your avatar looks funny so i think you dont want legs on your body
atm the feet looks flat so i would add some highlights
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Everything but the feet.
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Old 07-16-2009, 03:18 PM
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Reminds me of Southpark.
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Old 07-16-2009, 04:25 PM
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Thanks for the comments guys, the feet are definitely too big.

@Liberated - Thanks a lot for the examples, I really like the second one so will probably try to work something like that out.
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Old 07-16-2009, 08:13 PM
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Old 07-16-2009, 08:30 PM
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Just doesn't look like meant for Graal.
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Old 07-16-2009, 08:40 PM
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The big feet have kind of grown onto me...maybe the shading needs to be fixed and such.
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Old 07-16-2009, 10:00 PM
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The big feet have kind of grown onto me...maybe the shading needs to be fixed and such.
^ This is how I kind of felt when creating it, to be chibi and cartoony with the big feet (as the head will probably feel a bit over sized as well when/if I get to that).
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Old 07-16-2009, 10:03 PM
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I feel you're trying to fit too much detail in to too little space, making it look noisy and busy.
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Old 07-17-2009, 05:43 PM
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The body itself is rather good imo. I think you just need to give a little more depth to the legs/feet. I did an edit to try and give you an example. I tried to keep it rather simple but hopefully you get the point.
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