Marine Pixeled

Em · #1 04-23-2007, 09:01 AM

thoughts ?

update 1:

updated head:

Current thoughts:
head looks flat I think..

Elk · #2 04-23-2007, 10:47 AM

more contrast =o
the pic is too dark
i guess you wanted to give it a ...dark feeling...like in war or so :S still

! maybe use red light effects and fire in the background

Infernix · #3 04-23-2007, 12:44 PM

not much of a camouflage feeling in the camo.

Elk · #4 04-23-2007, 01:04 PM

also..did you want to make the marines props right? if so, i can help you

Em · #5 04-23-2007, 09:23 PM

changed the camo..

Myomoto · #6 04-23-2007, 10:28 PM

I really dislike the head shape :s

Em · #7 04-23-2007, 10:47 PM

Redid head..

Minoc · #8 04-23-2007, 10:58 PM

Marines shouldn't have long hair, and why is he half naked?

Lylic · #9 04-23-2007, 11:01 PM

Considering its pixel art, I give it a 8/10

Em · #10 04-24-2007, 01:45 AM

It's just working concept graphics for a game.. He will probably hire someone to make proper ones once the coding is further along.

kia345 · #11 04-24-2007, 02:11 AM

I like the middle one

Rapidwolve · #12 04-24-2007, 05:12 AM

Aha thats cool

janett01 · #13 04-24-2007, 11:47 AM

thats a nice marine!

SayianOozaru · #14 04-24-2007, 03:23 PM

It made me laugh a little.

I like the cartoonish looking style you drew him in. Though, the neck and the head need to be moved more to the right...Right now he's at a 3/4's view, but it looks like his head were to be sitting on someones body faceing you...Kinda hard for me to explain, you should see the problem now, since it has been pointed out.

Also you should show where the chest ends. He's supposed to be pretty cut, but there's no mussle indentation by the right arm. You might also want to fix the left leg...It looks as though he were walking sideways at someone, or something. Might just be the way its supposed to look though. Its hard to tell.

But I like the design.

Em · #15 04-24-2007, 06:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SayianOozaru

It made me laugh a little.

I like the cartoonish looking style you drew him in. Though, the neck and the head need to be moved more to the right...Right now he's at a 3/4's view, but it looks like his head were to be sitting on someones body faceing you...Kinda hard for me to explain, you should see the problem now, since it has been pointed out.

Also you should show where the chest ends. He's supposed to be pretty cut, but there's no mussle indentation by the right arm. You might also want to fix the left leg...It looks as though he were walking sideways at someone, or something. Might just be the way its supposed to look though. Its hard to tell.

But I like the design.

Thanks, very useful comments.