New Level.

kabouter · #1 03-30-2004, 06:13 PM

Well, I quess its the first time I show a level here.
If you like it please give it a rate, if you dont like it give it a rate to and tell me what you don't like and what should be changed.

Its a level of my server (Nihil).

WanDaMan · #2 03-30-2004, 08:28 PM

For some strange reason, I like it

kabouter · #3 03-30-2004, 09:20 PM

lol, I know its a really really really really really boring level.
But its just a level on the OverWorld, nothing special..

GoZelda · #4 03-30-2004, 09:42 PM

You should detail it anyway.

haunter · #5 03-30-2004, 10:24 PM

Hmm, I like the basic outline of the path... Add some grass patches within the dirt area. The watercliffs are good, but could use a bit of touching up for my tastes... The cliffs at the top are too straight for my liking. Also, try adding more detail.

thrashsoul · #6 03-31-2004, 03:21 AM

I agree with shadow about the cliffs, also try to make the grass in patches, it looks better.

Genesis · #7 03-31-2004, 06:21 AM

Kid how long have you been making levels?

kabouter · #8 03-31-2004, 08:24 AM

lol, I don't know Genesis.

I have editted the level.

NeoJenova · #9 03-31-2004, 04:40 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Genesis
Kid how long have you been making levels?

If it hasn't been long, I would suggest he keep going he can only become better. He is already making very few tile errors, with practice his detail will improve.

WanDaMan · #10 03-31-2004, 05:37 PM

Even I make tile errors.. Everyone does..

haunter · #11 03-31-2004, 10:24 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by kabouter
lol, I don't know Genesis.

I have editted the level.

Cliffs look much better, for some reason the one on the right looks weird.. Oh, and on the water cliffs, those two straight pieces that lead to the edge of the level should be a bit less straight.

kabouter · #12 04-02-2004, 06:12 PM

Well, I hope you dont mind that i'm posting all these levels i'm making, but I just want you to take a look at this one, made it yesterday.

haunter · #13 04-02-2004, 10:24 PM

I'm going to merge this with your other outside level thread... If you make several levels in a short period of time, please try not to make a level for each one.

In regards to the level... The water is too plain, add a few wavy tiles... and the pathway is too plain as well... try adding some grass patches within the path... I personally think it could use a bit more detail all together, but that's just me.

Crono · #14 04-05-2004, 12:44 PM

I sort of like your path style, if it was a little little little bit more jaggedy and smaller it would be fine.

CasanovaCanavi · #15 04-06-2004, 09:27 PM

sorry but.. ew