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Old 07-30-2003, 02:06 AM
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level rate it.

level rate it.

and try to gimme whats wrong with it if you don't like it.

thankyou
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Old 07-30-2003, 02:18 AM
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It's nice, but nothing i havnt seen before, sorry i'd say 7.5
+There is alot of tile error's.. Good shot tho <3
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Old 07-30-2003, 04:16 AM
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nice.
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Old 07-30-2003, 05:22 AM
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Old 07-30-2003, 05:32 AM
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Old 07-30-2003, 05:45 AM
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nice.
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Ok I can obviously see you did not like the level. What didn't you like and what do you think I can do to fix it?
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Old 07-30-2003, 06:00 AM
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Ok I can obviously see you did not like the level. What didn't you like and what do you think I can do to fix it?
i hate you.
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Old 07-30-2003, 06:03 AM
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Old 07-30-2003, 07:24 AM
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I don't like it personally. The way you detailed it makes it look like I have a headache. I don't like so any twists and turns. To get a hirer rating out of me make the level more soft and soothing. Not so scary and jaggedy.

Tiling
Good tiling, in the since of few tile errors. I liked what effect you did on the lower right side with the water on the hill.
Score: 3/5

Detail
Whoa! I've seen worse, but you defiently got a little to trigger happy with random tiles. I think if you calm down and try to think out what goes where it will look better. Don't just pick tiles and throw them down.
Score: 1/5

Atmosphere
The level doesn't have a good feel to it. I can see what you were going for, but I don't think you achieved it because you got caught up to much in the detailing rather than making it flow as one level. Would have been a 4/5, but I don't feel like those gold tree's belogned in the level. They seemed to draw to much attention from the level.
Score: 3/5

Overal
All in all, not a bad level. To much detail in some parts, bad tile decision in some parts, but afterall it didn't end up being that bad.
Score: 3/5 (not on average)
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Old 07-30-2003, 01:28 PM
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have you stealed that level, something tells me that in my mind, i dont see why i shouldnt belive u made that


but i dont
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Old 07-30-2003, 08:05 PM
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have you stealed that level, something tells me that in my mind, i dont see why i shouldnt belive u made that


but i dont
i wouldn't be surprised if he did.
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Old 07-31-2003, 02:39 AM
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have you stealed that level, something tells me that in my mind, i dont see why i shouldnt belive u made that


but i dont

Huh? I never even took credit for making the level its just a picture of a level im asking for a rate. Does it have to be mine?
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Old 07-31-2003, 04:08 AM
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Huh? I never even took credit for making the level its just a picture of a level im asking for a rate. Does it have to be mine?
So, it isn't yours.

It's too wet.
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Old 07-31-2003, 05:01 AM
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have you stealed that level, something tells me that in my mind, i dont see why i shouldnt belive u made that


but i dont
Like u have any room to talk about stealing levels.
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Old 08-01-2003, 07:28 PM
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Like u have any room to talk about stealing levels.

back again, its fnny how u have dreamed of that i ever stealed ur levels, and never showed it to you, funny but owell its ur dream,

in the other thread, u said u THOUGHT i had stealed ur level, i had never heard of you before

but im about to say what say said in the other thread


if ur not 100% sure, plz ****
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