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Old 03-18-2007, 06:33 AM
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Old 03-18-2007, 07:03 AM
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It's on an alright path, could use a wee bit more detail, and make the rotting nails a bit more.. well visible

Other then that, it's a good gfx, definitely keep up the good work.

EDIT: Didn't notice it, theres also two white dots at the bottom, you might want to get rid of those, they clash with the hands almighty power ;(
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Old 03-18-2007, 01:25 PM
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hm, i think it comes across quite flat, you put shadows in areas that make a really weird shape.

Also if you add some AA to the fingures so they are not so sharp then it might look nicer.

Shouldnt worry about the detail till you have the basic hand form. AS hands are pretty hard, so far thats good
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Old 03-18-2007, 06:03 PM
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hm, i think it comes across quite flat, you put shadows in areas that make a really weird shape.

Also if you add some AA to the fingures so they are not so sharp then it might look nicer.

Shouldnt worry about the detail till you have the basic hand form. AS hands are pretty hard, so far thats good

Yes, Exactly what I was going to say...Been on pixelation long enough to give detailed crits eh, Tom?

Yes, so it's not really what Tom it isn't really the shadows that make a weird shape so much as I can clearly tell the way the top section of the hand is bending (I'm double jointed, don't ask) , rather it confuses the other shadows and you need to get them all looking nice together and having one solid lightsource.
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Old 03-18-2007, 09:20 PM
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Old 03-18-2007, 09:52 PM
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The pointer finger shouldn't be anywhere as close to the thumb as it is on your picture. And for some reason, the thumb looks longer than the pointer finger. Also, the shading still doesnt make sence there. D:
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Old 03-18-2007, 09:57 PM
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Old 03-18-2007, 10:23 PM
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Look at your own hand, see how it's shaped then add pointy nails
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Old 03-18-2007, 10:27 PM
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You need to draw the rest of the arm, put a window, and behind the window a little kid in bed with dinner plate eyes....then it would be awesome.
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Old 03-19-2007, 12:11 AM
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Look at your own hand, see how it's shaped then add pointy nails
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Yeah so if I made an anatomically perfect hand I wouldn't be Zideruic. Besides my hand is creepy enough it doesnt need nails.

Oh and Raelyn claims it's a total failure and I should start again totally.
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There is nothing creepy about that. Ugly, yes, but not creepy.
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Old 03-19-2007, 02:29 AM
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Old 03-19-2007, 02:52 AM
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bring the knuckles closer, its a bit long which destorys the anatomy.
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Old 03-19-2007, 03:15 AM
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