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Old 11-28-2006, 07:28 AM
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Hey guys, you did a really good job breaking down my last design, so I'd love if you could do it again.
What do you think ?
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Old 11-28-2006, 08:33 AM
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better, something about the rocks dosent feel right but no one can be perfect, this looks pretty spiffy =]
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Old 11-28-2006, 09:25 AM
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I think you should move down the grass and add more blue sky instead of the rocks.
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Old 11-28-2006, 03:16 PM
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I think you should move down the grass and add more blue sky instead of the rocks.
Yea. I think the rocks look a little bit too straight.
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Old 11-28-2006, 08:49 PM
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Old 11-28-2006, 09:01 PM
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Looks better :o
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Old 11-28-2006, 09:19 PM
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Looks really good, I just don't really like the rocks, they look more like grey marshmallows or something :<
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Old 11-28-2006, 09:40 PM
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something about the rocks dosent feel right
they are the same tiles that looked kind of bad
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Old 11-28-2006, 10:04 PM
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Looks nice, though, as the others stated, the rocks look out of place and don't really look nice. Try removing them and see what you can come up with?
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Old 11-28-2006, 10:56 PM
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i still think those rock would look cooler without an outline...
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Old 11-28-2006, 11:46 PM
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Old 11-28-2006, 11:54 PM
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I detest that you have moved the navigation from the left to the right. What direction do you read...?
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I detest that you have moved the navigation from the left to the right. What direction do you read...?
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Btw, I think the stones horizontal (upper) could go away, and replaced with, stars, a moon?
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Old 11-29-2006, 12:54 AM
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Updated again!
Yah I agree, left nav is stupid.
I'm gonna work on the header now, chompy, so we'll see what happens..
I kind of like the rocks on the top though.


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Old 11-29-2006, 01:15 AM
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The rocks could be good...if you were good at rocks.
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