A Level.. Rate Me

fowlplay4 · #1 03-30-2005, 07:54 AM

I dont know what to say but
Constructive Advice please?

its down the list..

Inspiration · #2 03-30-2005, 08:05 AM

Grass detail is bland and boring, improve the dirt detail, and there are tile errors in your cliffs.

Xcessive54321 · #3 03-30-2005, 08:11 AM

he said rate and comment to lol
6/10 fix your dirt path and put some grass patchs in it or something

Lord Sephiroth · #4 03-30-2005, 08:20 AM

4/10
Fix your cliffs diagonally. You've got the tiles going for the end of the cliffs not the actual diagonal tiles near the bottom.
Path is bland and boring.
Detail up the grass a bit, don't drop the shredded deep grass on everything.
Re-opened the picture and looked at the cliffs. They're mostly all wrong. Even the cave opening and everything.
Revised rate to 3/10

fowlplay4 · #5 03-30-2005, 08:36 AM

After getting some help...
After constant ways to make it look a little better..
A Seaside small cliff area.

Inspiration · #6 03-30-2005, 09:33 AM

I'd suggest re-trying the cliff work. They are one big tile error.

fowlplay4 · #7 03-30-2005, 10:05 AM

You may want to check the level again.

Inspiration · #8 03-30-2005, 10:39 AM

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Originally Posted by fowlplay4

You may want to check the level again.

Cliffing is better, grass detail/sand detail still need work.

Crono · #9 03-30-2005, 04:06 PM

not bad at all!

add more detail, "detail" the sand, detail the water, make the cliffs more flexable and boom, it'll look hawt.

I'll give you a 5/10

fowlplay4 · #10 03-30-2005, 10:10 PM

I need examples of detail because i cant figure out what to add.

Inspiration · #11 03-31-2005, 09:16 AM

One Example Coming Right Up........................

maximus_asinus · #12 03-31-2005, 04:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Inspiration

One Example Coming Right Up........................

I dislike how you tiled the grass, you used the long grass tile way to much.

Inspiration · #13 04-01-2005, 12:37 AM

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Originally Posted by maximus_asinus

I dislike how you tiled the grass, you used the long grass tile way to much.

It's not used in a repeated/bland form however.

Of all "grass" tiles, that one can be used the most without looking crappy, if you do it right.

maximus_asinus · #14 04-01-2005, 02:03 AM

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Originally Posted by Inspiration

It's not used in a repeated/bland form however.

Of all "grass" tiles, that one can be used the most without looking crappy, if you do it right.

once you overuse a tile, it degrades the overall quality of the level.

Judge_S · #15 04-01-2005, 02:14 AM

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Originally Posted by maximus_asinus

I dislike how you tiled the grass, you used the long grass tile way to much.

I feel inclined to agree.

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Originally Posted by maximus_asinus

Example Coming Right Up........................

Upon first glance, I notice nothing but a huge array of grass. If I were to critique further, I'd even go so far as to say that your level has too much detail. Call me old fashioned, but I like my levels simple, with a fair amount of detail, but not nearly as much as shown in yours.
Not to make it seem like I'm shifting critisism only one way, I also have to say that Fowl's level is bordering on too much detail.