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Old 05-07-2004, 08:10 PM
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I made two levels for Worlds (that private server), the two houses are right above the mountain-cliff-thingy. I also included a "full screen" of the two houses so you can see the trees around it :x. I'm not anti tree I swear!


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Old 05-07-2004, 08:51 PM
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Jordan says: Methinks tis a bit too plain in some areas, try adding some filler... Perhaps a few solid objects.
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Old 05-07-2004, 09:22 PM
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Well, awsome Crono
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Old 05-07-2004, 09:23 PM
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Too plain for my taste. Not bad though.
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Old 05-07-2004, 09:24 PM
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the cliff/mountain stuffz looks neat =O
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Old 05-07-2004, 10:12 PM
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Nice, I quite like the detail, not to much but not to shabby
I dislike the path though, nice cliffing
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Old 05-08-2004, 03:52 AM
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The good:
-Cliffs
-Path edges

The bad:
-Houses
-Empty areas

good start though... if you spent as much time on the rest of the level, as you did on the cliffs, and path edges, it would be a great level...
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Heh. Funny thing is, the pathes were just there. But the edgy loopy things are mine :x. I'll fill in some empty gaps with -something- and send you screenshots. Thanks everyone
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Old 05-08-2004, 07:37 AM
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Sorry for the double post but wanted to make this seperate from comments

I fixed the path, I think, comments? Suggestions?
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Old 05-08-2004, 07:45 AM
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Old 05-08-2004, 09:30 AM
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Path's great; I'm surprised you havn't made a server or a huge map yet, i'd love to see the outcome
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Path's great; I'm surprised you havn't made a server or a huge map yet, i'd love to see the outcome
To tell you the truth I don't think I have the patience.
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mmm... nice!

Paths:
The paths are great, these are what I refer to as 'sexy paths' because they look so cool. The shape of them is also good because its very windy which looks very good.

Houses:
Nice nice, I like this look at they are small and not over powering so you can fit alot into one level even with alot of houses.

Detail:
As people have said the detail in places is blank, but what you have it great, just a bit more of it around objects I think to make it all look more full.

Other:
Cliffs are great and look fine, and so do the trees, but maybe make the trees less square in their shape and put them over some of the blank bits so you don't have to put alot of detail.

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Old 05-08-2004, 11:58 AM
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Thanks Spark ! What number rating would you give it?
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7.5/10

I like the cliffs, and the paths (Did you just use the path gen though?)

The houses remind me of Val for some reason
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