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Old 01-31-2003, 05:44 PM
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Please rate this level out of 10
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Old 01-31-2003, 08:14 PM
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comment: Ok this level isnt good, you havnt worked well on tile floor, its boring and everything, keep using ur light effects just dont take to much light effects in small levels. The tiles dont fit, it looks weird, some floor tiles, and then you used grass and like floor tiling to water, They can be nice some times, use it right.

Improve it and it maibe can work out well.
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Old 02-01-2003, 05:21 AM
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i say a 2/10 to. its a little to "flashy/bland" you could put a little bit more detail into it
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Old 02-01-2003, 08:23 AM
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4/10 good try keep working it looks too boring
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Old 02-01-2003, 10:13 AM
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I think 4! i dont like the edges! and the light effects arent placed so good!
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Old 02-01-2003, 02:20 PM
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K, update on the floor and a little on the lights :-/
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Old 02-01-2003, 07:58 PM
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4.5 detail the grass more and make the outside diff shapes instead of a square
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Old 02-01-2003, 08:01 PM
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I don't like the way you have grass north of the walkway and water south of it.
Try just using one of them.
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Old 02-01-2003, 08:40 PM
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I dont like how the grass is same each side, also the grass is a bit... blank! Also the pillars on the left and right work well, but not on top nor bottom. Finally the bush tops dont work too well as they dont meet.
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Old 02-24-2003, 05:55 PM
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I don't like the way you have grass north of the walkway and water south of it.
Try just using one of them.
That's it.

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Old 02-24-2003, 08:22 PM
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Pointless and bland. 0/10
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Old 02-25-2003, 03:57 AM
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Ok, where the columns meet in a corner, fix that section! it looks like a jumble of bricks. Also, do NOT make the level symmetrical. Never in life do you see two identical ponds, even if man-made.
Also, add more variety to the tiles on the carpet.
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Old 02-25-2003, 11:51 PM
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0/10.
Ugly.
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Old 02-26-2003, 12:12 AM
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2/10 The pillars look odd , maybe because they really don't blend with the tiles around them so it looks like it is just pasted there. Blend the tiling more so the tiles have something in common. Lighting is still off , use less white light .
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Old 02-26-2003, 08:37 PM
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I laugh everytime I come on levels forums now, because everyone give like 0/10 and 0.1/10. Haha, god love you.
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