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Originally posted by HunterTerryon
Well not much to see atm but this is what ive been working on.Im gonna try to go for the cartoon-like design that graal was orginaly designed for.
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Okay, since this is actually good, and fairly original, I'll help out by pointing out the things I think would make it better:
FRONT VIEW:
1) the front view looks pretty good, but the eyes kinda look crossed, like the pupils are too close together
2) the jacket edges are shaped weird... why aren't they more straight, unless he pulls the bottoms of his jacket behind his back
3) the arms could proably be in a bit more, the seem to kinda look like they are detached from the body.
BACK VIEW:
1) It looks like an enormous amount of sweat has built up in the middle of his back... fix the shading! lol
2) again, the arms seem detached from the body, and from a back view like that, you really wouldn't see the arms as much, they'd be more in front of the body
SIDE VIEW:
1) The head is weirdly shaped, that's really the only way I can say it
2) the head is also not in the same direction as the body, while you have the body showing half of the back leg and the back hand, the head is turned totally sideways. There should be two eyes shown on the head if it's at that angle, and again, the pupil just seems weird.
3) the nose has to go, or you need to change it a little, because it's just weird and makes the entire image look amateur
Just one comment about the hair, it seems a little glued to his head. So unless that is like, incredibly short hair, you should probably make the hair stand out more, heh. People have a tendancy to glue the hair to the head, barely giving it any volume or height, which of course, makes it look bad.