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Old 06-12-2006, 01:40 AM
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A...crate?


A crate I made for killerogue.
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Old 06-12-2006, 03:24 AM
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Looks too shiny, and the texture you almost had going is completely lost because of the black line you used to seperate the top and front.

The tone difference, if applied properly, should be enough.
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Old 06-12-2006, 07:39 AM
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This was my attempt at a boat...advise please.
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Old 06-12-2006, 08:08 AM
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Too shiny, still
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Old 06-12-2006, 08:26 AM
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How do you suggest I make it less shiny? I guess I don't understand.
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Old 06-12-2006, 08:49 AM
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You need to find a point where its shiny...
I can't really show it now, I'm currently at school
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Old 06-12-2006, 09:03 AM
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It also looks like it's only 2 inches wide.
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Old 06-12-2006, 09:14 AM
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You also need to work on the texture
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Old 06-12-2006, 06:52 PM
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Alright 'll work on that for the future, thanks.



Is this a bit better?
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Old 06-12-2006, 08:07 PM
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Old 06-12-2006, 08:19 PM
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The highlights / shadows are put in the wrong place. You have been shading stuff in strip patterns instead of shading what parts should be. When you shade in strips instead of around edges or in the center, your object comes off looking a bit like cellophane. Please note what I've done in the image below.
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Old 06-12-2006, 09:15 PM
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why r there 3 shining spots I think it looks odd
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Old 06-12-2006, 09:29 PM
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What three spots do you mean?
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Old 06-12-2006, 09:51 PM
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I like the design, But it is a bit shiny in certain points where it should not be. I also dont very much like how flat it looks . But overall just work on your lighting.
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What three spots do you mean?
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