First Time Caller

[starkid99]

This is my first attempts to do a level in about two years X_X.
I can take any advice/arguments so punch me out.

[starkid99]

2(Sample with lighing effects)((They bounce across the scrren which makes them look cool))

[DiabloSK]

ok well your water above the waterfall has a tiling error, maybe put some waves / rocks in it too

the water under your waterfall is too square, try making it an interesting shape.

your house is good

i see quite a few easy to fix tiling errors,
the cliffs where the path goes threw it... you need to take that out its just a big tiling error, try to put some bushs and swamp tiles and add some other stuff to make it interesting, it seems kind of plain to me.

other then that its a good start and keep on trying.

-Flu

[Cid_Night]

ya take out the whole cliffs there unless you want to try and fix them, those little cliff type things are some of the most pain in the ass to tile things around, so experimenting with that will be good practice. Besides that the house is pretty good, and the grass tiles below it are errored so just search around for the correct edge tiles. Basically fixing up this level would be good practice, so go for it.

[zell12]

you need help.

[VampiricTutorNewHD]

Move 1/2 of the giant waterbowl down just 1 y and you will be fine with the tile error there.

[Poogle]

3/10

[cloudstrifevii]

I like the house but wahts with the path going through the cliff and the guy with the afro?

[Spark910]

Ok first timein 2years, may not be used to new tile set so...

-House, there are tiles for bricks that are not the side ones
-Path through cliff?
-Dont just plonk trees down for sake of it
-Blue things above the house? Not need is there?
-The water, well tile error in watercliff/bank
-Dont right click to fill in the shallow water, Also big shallow water doesnt look nice at all, have small patches.

Overall:

This level looks like your not very talanted at level making, keep at it and like most people you will pick new styles up (Try looking at other peoples levels on forums for ideas, and on servers Not 2001,2002,classic Not good levels to look at as not much detail...}