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Originally Posted by anubis_wing
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I think I'll make some edits to this, but not for another day or two.
Nice attempt and straying from a normal chair, it's certainly interesting, but the ice needs alot of work
With the shape of it..
Did you want the side crystals to look like they were jutting straight out from the side? As it is they look like they're coming forward from behind the seat back. It's subtle, the lines from the edges oconverging in the center of each crystal (the lines making it look like it comes to a point) just need to be inverted to be pointing towards the point, and not the base. (I'm very confusing...I know... sorry ^_^;;
The top crystal form...well..ah.. that one's all wrong The perspective of it is all off. I would suggest making it look more like a slab instead of attempting a 6 sided crystaline form if you intend to stay with the current size, otherwise you have to imagine what such crystal would look like when viewed from above, not straight on horizontally.
With the coloring of it...
There is no depth to this chair. Everything is almost the same color and light level, the only cues we have to that are the outlines layed out. It needs more contrast put in the right places.
Give me some time and I'll see what I can do with it
Unless you would rather have me back off and leave you to it.