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Old 09-02-2005, 09:07 AM
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How do my outside level and bowling alley look

I was trying to make my level colorful and neat.



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Old 09-02-2005, 09:09 AM
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There's nothing wrong with color. That level is awesome.
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Old 09-02-2005, 09:56 AM
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The level doesn't seem done and I don't like the outlines of the level.
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Old 09-02-2005, 11:56 AM
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The level is horrible. Tile errors in the grass, water, and just plain ugly roofs. I don't see how you can actually compare any levels to UN when most of the UN levels are better then the other classic server levels now.

Everything is square, the dirt looks like it was tile generated or is. and it has no outer detail. I could go on, but I have already said enough for you to realise it is not a good level.
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Old 09-02-2005, 02:58 PM
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Do an alt + 2 screenshots, I'd like too see the detail of the new images you have used.
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Old 09-02-2005, 04:34 PM
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The buildings all looks the same, except for the roofs and the one large building in the top right has a wierd roof. Also, the shalow water pools in the top left (and in the rest of the level) were tileobjects, try to make them a bit different. The boat GFX are not set up right for the graal perspective, and the grass in the upper right corner needs detail. Also, the deep water in the uper right needs waves and the water near the edges of the island should be more shallow. Though some of the levels on UN could use some work, this is deffinatly no where near what Un has on their server, sorry.
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Old 09-02-2005, 08:10 PM
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Old 09-02-2005, 08:34 PM
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Old 09-02-2005, 10:10 PM
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I like it!
the bowling alley looks really cool too and with the lighting effects you can do Disco bowling! ;-D
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Old 09-02-2005, 10:28 PM
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I like it!
the bowling alley looks really cool too and with the lighting effects you can do Disco bowling! ;-D
With fog machines..
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Old 09-02-2005, 11:36 PM
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the bowling inside is very nice ^_^
and I found another tile error on the outside- the windows of the buildings, their the same ones you would use for a ground floor window.
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Old 09-05-2005, 03:51 PM
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Tile errors: The level lacks all detail and the lines are to straight >.> Path generator?

View: The boat and the buildings... I don't think I need to explain it cause welll let me than. The angle on the boat and the angle on the buildings? whats up with that
The bridge? is it a bridge or is it..some weird missplaced item?

The bushes? aren't they a little out of place?

The colours are very dull sorry (like I told you on aim :P)
Outside 0 <- out of 10
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Its cool
There a few minor glitches but notting important and it basicly works (all the graphics in total) Unlike the outside its nicely organized and it looks good
You might want to try to work on front part a bit (front wall.. supposidly the outside of the building) You could try "using light effected walls" if you know someone who can script extremly well even make walls that get lighteffects if the player is under it (in a small radius around the player)
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Old 09-05-2005, 04:31 PM
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Bowling looks cool...
outside level has way too many straight lines, in the level detail and the graphics.
All the houses look the same except different graphics on the roof, no variety.
I kinda like the boats, but they could use some more detail.
The bridge should probably have water running under it? It looks odd just sitting there like that.
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Old 09-05-2005, 05:56 PM
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Woah, cool inside. I love it.

It would be better if you could actually see the detail within the levels.

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