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Old 06-21-2007, 08:00 PM
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I was thinking maybe...

...that this is an improvement?

I feel more satisfied with this level than the previous one but it's up to you guys to decide. Comments and critique greatly encouraged
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Old 06-21-2007, 08:05 PM
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I like the see into the basement thing, does it parallax?
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Old 06-21-2007, 08:16 PM
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No, it doesn't, since I'm not in any way good at scripting. Though, that is a fantastic idea

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Old 06-21-2007, 08:19 PM
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Well if you need help I might be able to do that for you.
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Old 06-21-2007, 08:23 PM
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Aye, it'd be really good if you could set me along the lines but I'm a bit proud about things being DONE for me, just the way I've grown up. I'd really love to learn how.
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Old 06-21-2007, 08:31 PM
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Well it'd take a bit of scripting. I was just messing around trying to figure out how I'd do it. I'd probably do a showimg(or setimgpart, doesn't matter), and crop the image, changing the x/y depending on the players x/y in the level.
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Old 06-21-2007, 08:33 PM
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The whole fire thing is a bit ugly, try using different graphics or something. The lower wall is a bit plain. The rest looks great, good job.

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Old 06-21-2007, 08:47 PM
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I like the idea of showing the level below it

I'm wondering if the stairs on the left and right are supposed to go down to the previous level or just down a bit in this level or are they going up to a next level? If they are just going down a bit the perspective is off.

For the middle stairs you should put something behind it so you can't just walk behind it and get to the next level, if you know what I mean.
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Old 06-21-2007, 08:58 PM
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It's very good!

Circled in Grey has a nice effect you've used, I'd suggest you do this same effect for the areas circled in Yellow.

I'd also modify the bits circled in Green. Not a fan of what you've done...

Overall though, it's very nice. Lovely job
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Old 06-21-2007, 09:12 PM
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I really like this level. Its a cool style with showing distance and stuff. 10/10
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Old 06-21-2007, 09:38 PM
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Thanks you all for comments and critique. I will improve my level once I'm finished installing my web-server.
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Old 06-21-2007, 11:03 PM
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Decent level you got there. I like the part where it looks like its leading down to the bottom floor. Though on the very bottom row of tiles in that spot you should have use another tile or custom gfx because I hate how the small brick tiles just randomly end right there.
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Old 06-21-2007, 11:04 PM
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What would be even cooler is somehow(dunno if you can) tracking the players in the bottom level and showing them via showimgs.
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Old 06-23-2007, 05:07 AM
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That distance thing looks really cool. Good job. =]
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Old 06-26-2007, 09:24 AM
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I liked the old level better I miss the old man and the cloudies!!!
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