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Old 11-25-2002, 11:12 AM
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Rate this level plz. 1-10. Add a few comments and suggestions as well. thx =D
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Old 11-25-2002, 04:43 PM
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I like that level but you need to improve the floor tiling.



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Old 11-25-2002, 06:10 PM
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I like that level but you need to improve the floor tiling.



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I like that level. Tiling is fine. 8/10
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Old 11-26-2002, 02:11 AM
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Rate this level plz. 1-10. Add a few comments and suggestions as well. thx =D
because you can do better?
id give it say 7.5/10! nice level!
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Old 11-26-2002, 02:14 AM
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not bad but i only give a 6! you should add some lights! and more details in water!
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Old 11-26-2002, 03:23 AM
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You're one to talk.. Rofl.
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I like that level. Tiling is fine. 8/10
You should shut your mouth, period.

I like the water, but the actual room sucked frankly. 7/10
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Old 11-26-2002, 04:38 AM
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wow...people rate high these days. For an outside level everything is monotanous and much too symetrical. The tiles are basic. The detailing is not well done. It's a good start, but it needs alot of work. 4/10
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Old 11-26-2002, 06:32 AM
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lol thx. ye it could use a good smack up side the head to fix the symetry lol
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Old 11-27-2002, 11:22 AM
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Its an alright level.... 5/10

i dont like when people mix outside tiles with insides....its Ebil
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Old 11-27-2002, 02:43 PM
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one thing about graal... there is rarely natrual flow... how many rivers go north in nature? *not saying this one does, but in general*

there are lots of things like natrual flow of nature and water and all of that, that should really influence design of levels... makes for better... sexier levels humans have a need for everything to be symetrical and even... nature does not
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Old 11-30-2002, 11:44 AM
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Old 11-30-2002, 07:53 PM
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6/10.

Some lights would be nice.
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Old 11-30-2002, 08:16 PM
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one thing about graal... there is rarely natrual flow... how many rivers go north in nature? *not saying this one does, but in general*

there are lots of things like natrual flow of nature and water and all of that, that should really influence design of levels... makes for better... sexier levels humans have a need for everything to be symetrical and even... nature does not
the Nile flows north.

i give it 5/10
somebody already mentioned symetry
i can't see any situation where you would ever have a room on a river just open like that... there'd be a roof, and hence, you wouldn't see the river and room at the same time
you could call it a porch or something but that just doesn't work with the level
what's it supposed to be?

i spy with my little eye...... tile errors in the floor!!! x.X that is so newbish. lol
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Old 11-30-2002, 08:51 PM
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This is good, and looks effective, although its a boring straight shape the rest makes it looks good.

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Im not so sure about the tables, it looks as if it has no point to it. And the middle looks a bit blank.

Water:
It repeats on each side of the level, like a mirror, which is a cool effect. Also on waterfall, dont use them gifs/pngs it looks abit stupid just floating there.

Sparks Rating: 7.5/10
-A bit too blank in places. And nothing too new that we havent seen before.
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Old 12-01-2002, 12:12 AM
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one thing about graal... there is rarely natrual flow... how many rivers go north in nature? *not saying this one does, but in general*

there are lots of things like natrual flow of nature and water and all of that, that should really influence design of levels... makes for better... sexier levels humans have a need for everything to be symetrical and even... nature does not
any river in the southern hemisphere flows north....*mutter*
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