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Old 12-06-2002, 04:58 AM
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Ok well I started this level a while ago for Bravo, I did it quite quickly actually as if you look at the tiles theres nothing hard there. I never finished it though, as the bit where you can see the tables and red floor I knew whatever I put in there it wouldn't look good (Neg finished it for me, I think I may jazz up the floor later on) So for now, ignore the red floor and tables.

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-That bit in top left is ment to be where you enter level, it doesn't look that nice as I never edited it once I decided I wasn't going to finish the level.

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Old 12-06-2002, 05:01 AM
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Note that white light isn't there its a script weapon. Damn ALT+2 thougt it did the whole level, well you cant see lights now =)

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Old 12-06-2002, 05:07 AM
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Lookks rubbish without lights! Here is another S/s with lights: Sorry for posting 3. But dont look the same without lights!
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Old 12-06-2002, 06:31 AM
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I dunno if I like this alot, its orgional, thats all that counts.
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Old 12-06-2002, 06:37 AM
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Note that white light isn't there its a script weapon. Damn ALT+2 thougt it did the whole level, well you cant see lights now =)

Ok here it is:
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Old 12-06-2002, 07:06 AM
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hmm

i like it...i hink you could do more with the water that goes through the walls make it look better less repeative like different pattarns might make it better.
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Old 12-06-2002, 08:03 AM
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6.5/10...it's a good level, i don't really like how the tables are just in the middle of a hallway O_O
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Old 12-06-2002, 11:26 AM
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One thing I do like is the effects in the water, it's been done before but not in that magnitude.
You combined an inside/outside look but I don't care for the inside.

I dislike the entrance from the bottom, the tiles stand out too much. Make atleast a border around it so it fits in more.
The bookcase when you come in, seems out of place. Also, the bottom of it doesn't fit in well with the castle tiles as it's meant for the house tiles.

It's a pretty plain level.

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Old 12-06-2002, 04:20 PM
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I dont like 1 one.


1. 4.5/10
2. 7/10
3. 6/10
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Old 12-07-2002, 07:07 AM
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basic level design 5/10
npc's in level 8/10
so...

overall
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Old 12-07-2002, 06:37 PM
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Yeah I agree, the level isn't that exciting. The walls are boring for it really... =P
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Old 12-08-2002, 12:08 AM
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1st-3/10
2nd-5/10
3rd-5.5/10

those two arent bad, just keep running with that idea and make em a bit more interesting i suppose.
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Old 12-08-2002, 01:24 AM
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