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Old 12-01-2002, 02:59 AM
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Rate. Aiight?

rate and give explenation why you gaved that rating, thanks.



Oh, yes i forgot to tell, its a race, so the poles will stay where they are.
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Old 12-01-2002, 03:10 AM
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Grass detailing is very repetitive with only a few detailing tiles used. Also, since those poles are staying, I would suggest making some images for when they go over the dirt. When they go over the water you should use the fence tile that goes directly down, because the pole would go down into the ground of the water. Also, I don't care for the path too much, I like the path used as it was intended to be, with the four inside path tiles used and the two you used in this on the outside.
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Old 12-01-2002, 03:31 AM
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lotsa tile errors, but not bad...keep workin.
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Old 12-01-2002, 03:59 AM
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Old 12-01-2002, 04:05 AM
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Whilst similiar to my inside level previously posted, it looks quite nice I guess. 6/10.
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Old 12-01-2002, 04:42 AM
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Whilst similiar to my inside level previously posted, it looks quite nice I guess. 6/10.

actuly i told you this already, i got that idea wich i used some times from Frolic, there main level long time ago.


I like that kind of style and i use it often =O?
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Old 12-01-2002, 04:43 AM
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actuly i told you this already, i got that idea wich i used some times from Frolic, there main level long time ago.


I like that kind of style and i use it often =O?
Uhhmm, first of all, you DIDN'T tell me this, and second of all, the structure is obvious, YOU did copy my layout, although it doesn't matter, as it is not important, frankly.
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Old 12-01-2002, 05:01 AM
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Uhhmm, first of all, you DIDN'T tell me this, and second of all, the structure is obvious, YOU did copy my layout, although it doesn't matter, as it is not important, frankly.
yes i did tell you on aim even if you dont remember lol, the layout is a idea from Frolic who i have edited.
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Old 12-01-2002, 05:06 AM
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yes i did tell you on aim even if you dont remember lol, the layout is a idea from Frolic who i have edited.
Yeah right, just go here http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/s...threadid=40477 and check the picture YOU made from my level, and you'll see that it is similiar to this inside, don't give me that nonsense.
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Old 12-01-2002, 05:21 AM
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Yeah right, just go here http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/s...threadid=40477 and check the picture YOU made from my level, and you'll see that it is similiar to this inside, don't give me that nonsense.
Ummm, ok, they don't look too similar. Just calm down, it's not the end of the world. My opinion, why you want to copy that level? As I said before, too many clashing colors. The fact that he used a similar combination might be because he liked it so he figured he'd try it. It's not like he copied the layout/design of your level, just tryed some of the tile combination. Don't get all huffy over something like this when in fact it's not a big problem.
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Old 12-01-2002, 11:36 AM
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good except for the grass, it shud be bunched, not equally spread out. 6.5/10 (outside level)
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Old 12-01-2002, 07:13 PM
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Outside Level -

Path:
Well this is ok, but its get boring after a few seconds due to the mass of greyness!

The stakes make it look horrible as you see water goes straight to grass, try and use the other stake more to the left, one without the bottom to it.

Detail:
Water, dirt path, and trees are fine, but everything else isnt that nice. The grass detail seems to be a right clicker which is horrible. And also there isn't enough dark green in the grass detail, and the other path looks out of place.

Sparks Rating: 5/10
-Sorry for a low score, but the grass and paths let you down.

Inside Level -

Shape:
This is nice, but the tile errors in the bush looks horrible.

Floor:
This is great really nice, brilliant use of tiles for a floor, brings lots of color and intrest to the level!

Problems:

-Door at top (Looks Weird)
-That brown roof (Can see grass)
-Castle tiles at top (Looks boring compared to bottom)

Sparks Rating: 8/10
-Just a few things to make better.
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Old 12-02-2002, 06:57 PM
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Yeah right, just go here http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/s...threadid=40477 and check the picture YOU made from my level, and you'll see that it is similiar to this inside, don't give me that nonsense.
Getting a little fiesty there, eh boy? That level doesn't look alike. Stop being a hypocrite Timp'. "He can have his own opinion some-time *****". Erm...Just no. Yeah... No.
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I'm going to do a quick rating here. Gots to go to school..
First Level-
O.o' Nice path.
Thoouggh.. If you wanna make it real spiffy ( If it's for a server event ) Make an image for the post with a black bottom or something to that extend.. Maybe Blue. And if you do do that, put deep water on the sides.
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O.o' Right..Don't know how to rate this level with out smacking my self..
I'm thinking 8/10 aswell. Nice Lay out. X_x
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Old 12-02-2002, 11:50 PM
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Old 12-03-2002, 12:04 AM
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Getting a little fiesty there, eh boy? That level doesn't look alike. Stop being a hypocrite Timp'. "He can have his own opinion some-time *****". Erm...Just no. Yeah... No.
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If you would take a look at the newest pic of the level there, you would see that it is quite similiar, and I didn't mind, but to lie about it after admitting on AIM that he had kinda copied it, it just set me off. You really want to pick a fight at every occasion, just to be turned down, and ignored? No, no...
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