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Old 11-18-2002, 06:22 PM
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Inside Level. Ratish.

I turned the regular house tiles into this. I like it. >P What do you think of it?
1-10 please.
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Old 11-18-2002, 06:25 PM
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Oh yeah, and this one.

Oh yeah. And this one. >D
Rate 1-10. Thankey.
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Old 11-18-2002, 06:32 PM
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1: 5.5/10

2: 6.5/10
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Old 11-19-2002, 03:07 AM
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ok first of all, I think Jaffer undermarked you! Im giving you more as I like them more!
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Level 1

Walls:
These are good, not straight, nice and bendy which makes even a crap level look half good. (Its not a crap level!)

Objects:
The bed, bar, table, chair and book shelf are nicely placed and dont look out of the way, as alot of people have a big level with about 6 things spread out which is not needed.

Floor:
It would be better if you stuck with one of the 2 designs you use with the red square else people may think they are tile errors, im taking there not, right!? The dark red diamonds and brown squares are good and ad nice contract to it.

Other:
I dont know why there are those little blue things in each top corner but it looks good anyway


Sparks Rating: 8.5/10
-Nice not too crowded or too spacious, Just right!
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Level 2

Walls:
They are nice, maybe too thick as these walls can often let people down as they aren't the most interesting so people often see the level as being blank and boring, when its not!

Objects:
There all in good places, but maybe more the Stove to the middle and make the level taller and put a pot on the other side to make it nice and even.

Floor:
This is good, but I dont really like the double line of small dark red square there only good if there is one line and not two. The red squares are good, but add one tile like in my attachment else it looks like a tile error. Apart from that its good!

Other:
I think you coul take them like posts that are holding the roof up away from the top and only leave them on the bottom as you dont need them on the top, and we wouldnt see them in real life!


Sparks Rating: 7/10
-This is good, but I think the castle walls takes our eyes of the detail of the levels, and I liked the other one better so you have a 7. Not that I don't like it =)
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Overall Level Making Rating: 7.5/10
-Good, keep it up, your inside levels are great and coming along!

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Old 11-19-2002, 03:14 AM
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Old 11-19-2002, 03:21 AM
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Yeah well =)
Saves someone postsing or lots of people saying if you get it online that it is a tile-error. And it will make the tyling look about 25% better if you put them in as they will blend better =D
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Old 11-19-2002, 04:32 AM
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first one 5/10
second one 7.5/10
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Old 11-19-2002, 05:09 AM
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1st one: i gotta say i like this level, not many ppl nowadays use those insides i find, and i really like it, 8/10.

2nd one: Good job of tiling with this one to!! you got soem good creativity goin there :P 7.5/10
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Old 11-19-2002, 06:34 PM
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Lol. Thanks.
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Old 11-20-2002, 02:50 PM
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Good eye Sparks. Good eye.
That dosent look like a tile error to me..........
the style is repeated on the other sections.
its <<<<<<<<<< [square] diagonally.....
cause i can a design, or not...
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Old 11-21-2002, 02:18 AM
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If you had red squares, layed them down then put the bored around them then it would be impossible, which is why I think it looks like a tile error. In his case it could not be one as there like that through out the level, but still =D Up toh im.
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