Inside Level

Timpan3 · #1 11-20-2002, 11:18 PM

Hey you all, rate (1 - 10) my new inside level I just finished. I haven't made levels in ages, so sorry if it's not up to scratch, but anyway, here it is.

syltburk · #2 11-20-2002, 11:22 PM

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Originally posted by Timpan3
Hey you all, rate (1 - 10) my new inside level I just finished. I haven't made levels in ages, so sorry if it's not up to scratch, but anyway, here it is.

post a pic maibe?

syltburk · #3 11-20-2002, 11:23 PM

Oh well here it is.

rating: 7/10

Timpan3 · #4 11-21-2002, 12:09 AM

Ah, saw some flaws in my level, sorry, oh , and thanks for the rate Thomas

syltburk · #5 11-21-2002, 12:34 AM

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Originally posted by Timpan3
Ah, saw some flaws in my level, sorry, oh , and thanks for the rate Thomas

np, check this level.

Rawr.

Timpan3 · #6 11-21-2002, 12:48 AM

6/10

The floor is quite nice, but the rest is not so good.

And dude, this is for rating MY level, not yours, so I think you should stop posting here.

Spark910 · #7 11-21-2002, 02:15 AM

Timpan's level, im rating that...

Shape:
The shape is great. Fun and interesting. But im not so sure about the two grass hut things, as there just there and not connected very well.

Originality:
You have used a wide range of tiles, of which makes this level great to look at and fun to be in. I don't think that the split tiles off the castle steps are that good as I think the will look better together.

Lights:
Did you add lights to this levels? If you did good, if you didn't maybe add some to the lanterns to make the level a bit brighter and full with colour.

Improvements:

Lights:
Add some to the lanterns, I know this is a blank version of what it could be. As if you turned it into a full level you would add chairs, plants, tables etc... But lights would be nice!

Tiles:
I think it would be better without the split castle stair tiles, as they look weird. There is also a tile error, look at attachment!

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Sparks Rating: 8.5/10
-This is good you would get a 9 if there were things like lights, tables, chairs etc...

Timpan3 · #8 11-21-2002, 02:45 AM

Ok I made a couple of changes (the passage way to the right will link to another part of the house, though there's no door there, it's therefore still in the same room, much like the newbie castle in Graal - The Adventure.

Gangster88 · #9 11-21-2002, 02:58 AM

its really good but remove theese things
and the blue stone looking tiles

Waltz5 · #10 11-21-2002, 08:56 AM

4/10

Way too many clashing colors.

SSRobgeta · #11 11-21-2002, 09:04 AM

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Originally posted by Waltz5
4/10

Way too many clashing colors.

That's exactly what I was gonna say.