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Old 07-01-2003, 07:32 PM
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Talking Boredem = Level!

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Old 07-01-2003, 08:17 PM
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9/10, I like it.
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Old 07-02-2003, 05:46 PM
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Old 07-02-2003, 06:24 PM
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5.7/10

I don't like the tile pathway or the ground detail, it could be better..
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Old 07-02-2003, 06:47 PM
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Hmm. The houses look quite grand, so it seems strange that the land around them is in such a state of disarray. They can't afford a gardener?
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Old 07-02-2003, 06:52 PM
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Old 07-02-2003, 07:04 PM
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Hmm. The houses look quite grand, so it seems strange that the land around them is in such a state of disarray. They can't afford a gardener?
They are cheap bastards,
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Old 07-02-2003, 07:29 PM
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There is no levels mod and I didn't delete any post of yours. The only possible culprits, then, would be the admins...
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Old 07-02-2003, 07:53 PM
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The red roof building is just complete crap.

The other one isnt to bad. Is the black top building part a chimney or a building? As a chimney its rather nice but the window shouldnt be on it. As a tower of sorts the black rooftop doesnt match the rest of the roofing and looks bad. Since most buildings you see are of the same roof types thatch, shingle, tar, etc.. You dont often see different roof types on the same house.

The grass detailing is ok about average I supppose.

Steps look like crap try to make them the same length all the way down.

I'm not to sure I like the path.. the color theme in your level is a little blah with the mix and match of light and dark tiles in a pattern not thougth out thoroughly.

All in all I would peg this level at about a 5/10
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Old 07-02-2003, 08:03 PM
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The red roof building is just complete crap.

The other one isnt to bad. Is the black top building part a chimney or a building? As a chimney its rather nice but the window shouldnt be on it. As a tower of sorts the black rooftop doesnt match the rest of the roofing and looks bad. Since most buildings you see are of the same roof types thatch, shingle, tar, etc.. You dont often see different roof types on the same house.

The grass detailing is ok about average I supppose.

Steps look like crap try to make them the same length all the way down.

I'm not to sure I like the path.. the color theme in your level is a little blah with the mix and match of light and dark tiles in a pattern not thougth out thoroughly.

All in all I would peg this level at about a 5/10
It's a chimney, there is smoke coming out of it, but its a alt+1 level. :-D
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Old 07-02-2003, 08:21 PM
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It's a chimney, there is smoke coming out of it, but its a alt+1 level. :-D
Ok I like the chimney just take the window out of it that's just wierd.
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Old 07-02-2003, 10:53 PM
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Rate this level guys.

Off the record: It wasnt made by me.

But on the record: It was made by me, what do you think I am stupid and dont know that you cant post for other people? pshhhh!
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Old 07-03-2003, 03:02 AM
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3/10

Red trees don't look very good, in my opinion, with water in the same level.
The waterfall comes from almost nothing.
It's mostly swamp.
No rocks or waves in the water.
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Old 07-03-2003, 03:33 AM
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Rate this level guys.

Off the record: It wasnt made by me.

But on the record: It was made by me, what do you think I am stupid and dont know that you cant post for other people? pshhhh!
Only thing I like is the ladder on the cliff. To much swamp tiles..But that is kinda Delterias(sp) style so I guess a 7/10.

First level: 5/10 I dont liek the bottom part. Make the water clif better and longer.
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Old 07-03-2003, 05:28 PM
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All the swamp tiles look like an attempt to hide poor detailing skills. Completely redo grass detailing design.

Water needs detailining.

Red tree's clash with level theme, colors shold blend not clash.

Waterfall is out of place. As previously stated as if it comes out of the ground itself. (looks bad)

Sand looks good nice firm grasp of how to do it. might consider trying the other border tiles for grass to sand. But it looks good.

Cliffs look good.

I dont like the path detailing it looks icky. Maybe trying a different tile placment or different tiles.

I think thats good for now until you get some of these things changed.

Rating: 4/10 Level subpar
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