New level FINALLY

Zethar · #1 10-01-2003, 07:23 AM

Well..This took me about 4 hours of fiddling with tile for cliffs ect and I think i've almost got it. I read some tutorials ect so this is the product plz rate.

ShadowStrike2k1 · #2 10-01-2003, 02:11 PM

Jesus told me that multicolor trees are stupid.

draygin · #3 10-01-2003, 04:56 PM

The half and half trees do look bad. I recommend keeping those solid. Good job on the cliffs the backside still has tile errors but it definatly looks alot better than your previous level. I recommend taking out some bushes and swamp tiles right now your level just looks cluttered. Its ok to have open green grass tiles as long as the whole level isnt that. Overall much betterthan before. I'd say about a 5 maybe a 6 but the level could use some work definatly much better though.

LegendaryAzreil · #4 10-02-2003, 01:51 AM

Not to good of a level for taking 4 hours on it.
5/10

DenoriZakarum · #5 10-02-2003, 02:16 AM

7/10 you need to take those split trees out, they...scare me

Zethar · #6 10-02-2003, 02:40 AM

ok lol
I'm working on it now. I'm setting dusk2 as a backpal and adding lamps and taking a fair amount of the swamp out and fixing my scary trees

Nick1988 · #7 10-02-2003, 02:49 AM

5.5/10, much better than your old one.

Zethar · #8 10-02-2003, 03:19 AM

kk try this now ;o
Took draygins advice but I cant find the tile errors

Judge_S · #9 10-02-2003, 05:22 AM

I don't like the path. It feels to blocky and square.

Zethar · #10 10-02-2003, 05:38 AM

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Originally posted by Judge_S
I don't like the path. It feels to blocky and square.

Yah it is. Now that you pointed it out.... I'll change it.
Give it a rating don't just point out flaws...

draygin · #11 10-02-2003, 05:10 PM

Lighting effects are far supperior to backpals which are crap. I recommend taking out the backpack and maybe if you want it to be darker use seteffect #,#,#,#; replace the # with numbers between .0 to 1 nothing higher than 1. But dont make it super dark so we cant see. The tile errors are on the back side of the cliffs. If you look the tiles dont line up properly.

Qwert616 · #12 10-02-2003, 10:14 PM

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Originally posted by Zethar

Give it a rating don't just point out flaws...

heh, usually it is the other way around.

I really don't see what the big deal is with ratings. I'd rather recieve tips on how to improve rather than an unofficial number value. ;/

Zethar · #13 10-03-2003, 02:21 AM

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Originally posted by Qwert616

heh, usually it is the other way around.

I think draygin pointed everything out

hehe.

Judge_S · #14 10-03-2003, 02:57 AM

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Originally posted by Zethar
Give it a rating don't just point out flaws...

I'm the quiet person who doesn't give ratings.

Azrael528 · #15 10-03-2003, 03:35 AM

That took you 4 hours? Seems a bit long for something like that. The grass detail needs some work, there are around 12 different ground tiles that are walkable, try to use a lot of them but make the placement good. Take your time with the path, make the sides more zig-zaggy and use both types of dirt borders. Don't use backpals.

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Jesus told me that multicolor trees are stupid.

jesus is incredibly wise.

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Lighting effects are far supperior to backpals which are crap. I recommend taking out the backpack and maybe if you want it to be darker use seteffect #,#,#,#; replace the # with numbers between .0 to 1 nothing higher than 1. But dont make it super dark so we cant see.

<3 for seteffect