It's... An... INSIDE LEVEL!? (Rate my level)

[DarkDragoon_Lloyd]

This level is really old... I just... fixed it up a bit. It was one of my first insides that was actually half decent!

I seriously suck at insides, though... -_-

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[Spark910]

Walls:
Nice idea, but they are a bit dull. The main reason is they repeat them selves, so loose the touch, the red bits are okay, its just the other bits (Does it look stupid without the other bits?)

Floor:
Well if I was you stick to a max of about 3 floor designs, and with what your doing, I'd say get just one good one, and put it though the whole level.

Also a note: Those bridge tiles look good like that, if you had them blue walls that delteria uses, that would look sweet.

Objects:
Well the bed looks lost, and the cooker would be fine with the normal bottom to it. And the book shelves look fine, except for that bottom tiles, but thats the tileset, not you.

Suggestions:
-Fix Floor
-Relook and consider changing walls
-Populate the level, its too empty!
-Make the bed interesting

Sparks Rating:
I'd say about 5.5/10
-Reason is its a bit blank, and some things dont look that nice.

Screenshot:
Look at that floor, I think thats what you tried to do with those floor tiles from inside kitchen, if not, it looks good using them like this =D

[TripleE]

Originally posted by DarkDragoon_Lloyd
This level is really old... I just... fixed it up a bit. It was one of my first insides that was actually half decent!

I seriously suck at insides, though... -_-

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YUCK!!!!1....I hate that. It looks like an earthquake was oging on while you made that level. 2/10

[draygin]

Looks like a drunk construction worker tried to make a house. I mean you would never see a building like that in real live. x.x *shudders* ok now for what to fix

Make the walls more straight or curved something that makes actual sense rather than random back and forth these are not cliffs they should be semi symetrical.

How many houses or buildings have only one room in it? Try adding some doors that go else where or adding walls in this current level to devide it up a bit.

You change floor tiles way to much. Do like spark said and try to stick to 3 or so and try to only change when going to different parts. Such as the kitchen might have those floor tiles etc..

Level is empty. This is the biggest downfalls of inside levels. They need graphics. You could try some potted plants maybe pottedplant.png

You might also try some minor note MINOR! Lighting effects. Perhaps light casting in from the door. Or some lamps a fire places. Just something you might see indoors. Personally I would probably put a soft glow with some smoke and set the smoke to be barely visible.

Ok thats a good start right there go ahead and make some changes and we'll take another look.

Over all I would say this is probably a 4/10 It's not predefined but it looks like some one trying to make an indoor level like they make their outdoor levels.

[Spark910]

Originally posted by TripleE

YUCK!!!!1....I hate that. It looks like an earthquake was oging on while you made that level. 2/10

Try and explain your reasons a bit more, point out specific problems and explain how to improve them, and if you dislike the whole level, then why? What doesn't work?

Its really a kick in the confidence when people just reply with things like that =/

[Tanken]

It's kinda messy, try to clean it up a bit.
5.5/10

[Azrael528]

the walls look kind of odd, try changing the tiles you used a little bit.

the bed is very ordinary and plain compared to the rest of the level.

try sticking with one or two types of floor designs, too many makes it look messy.

5/10, clean it up a bit and itll be nice.

also i assume those black tiles are walkable, probably volcano obsidian or something?

[Eric_1337]

1.5/10

Great try, sparky summed it up.

[GoZelda]

I suggest using just two floor styles. I mean, you have a sorta bedroom, and a kitchen kinda thing. Also, maybe add in some more stuff? I mean, youre bedroom does contain more than some bookshelves and a lil' table? And if there's a kitchen, people need a table or something to eat on. Think about that.