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Old 07-06-2003, 09:48 PM
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my first *real* level

this is my first real wholehearted attempt at making a level, so like, rate it and stuff. thanks.
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Old 07-06-2003, 10:30 PM
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Ive seen that whole level somewhere else.
If you made it nice.
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Old 07-06-2003, 11:45 PM
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Looks great. I dislike how people commonly flood their levels with cliffs though. Either way, I'd give it an 8/10.
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Old 07-07-2003, 12:25 AM
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Looks great. I dislike how people commonly flood their levels with cliffs though. Either way, I'd give it an 8/10.
I actually like cliffs.
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Old 07-07-2003, 12:50 AM
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Your definition must be different than everyone else's about you first real attempt. But nice anyway. 7/10
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Old 07-07-2003, 07:35 AM
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Well thank you for ratings, why does everyone say theyve seen it before? maybe my style isn't original enough or something.

anything i could change to make it better or something?
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Old 07-07-2003, 08:27 AM
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It looks nice, and is also very easy to look at.

As for your comment on originality, it's hard to be original with outside levels, so don't worry about it.
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Old 07-07-2003, 08:54 AM
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3/10

dont like the bumpy grass, makes it way to easy to detail grass and it looks aweful
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Old 07-07-2003, 02:54 PM
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I see tile errors that could have been prevented. Look at that one "dirt whole" and it's corners. Two of them have those green blocks placed in them. Too many cliffs, overuse of them makes them ugly. I dont like it when too many "grass over grass" is placed on the level, specialy when they're "straight", I prefer crooked.

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Old 07-07-2003, 04:48 PM
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dont like the bumpy grass, makes it way to easy to detail grass and it looks aweful
Post one of your levels, we could all use a laugh.


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Cliffs are so annoying. I hate cliffs. Not bad other than that, maybe use some different ground tiles.
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Old 07-08-2003, 01:19 AM
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Cliffs are so annoying. I hate cliffs. Not bad other than that, maybe use some different ground tiles.
Is could actually be considerd one of the best. IF he still ahs the talent he did when Faheria was alive.
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Old 07-08-2003, 03:18 AM
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Is could actually be considerd one of the best. IF he still ahs the talent he did when Faheria was alive.
Thank you =), Dunno if I still do or not...

I'll have to work for someone and find out =p
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Old 07-08-2003, 07:11 AM
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Post one of your levels, we could all use a laugh.

Shut up.
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Old 07-08-2003, 03:33 PM
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He should shut up, it's not exactly encouraging for people's levels to be described as awful.
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Old 07-08-2003, 03:58 PM
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He should shut up, it's not exactly encouraging for people's levels to be described as awful.
i said the bumby grass looks aweful not the level, learn how to read kid.
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